Hello i liked the chapter, with regard to the couple of naruto i would like Temari, if any less Hinata or Sakura because there are many stories of them and how that already bored, no more to say I hope the continuation, greetings.

Yo
I like your story very much and i'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Bon chapitre,j'aime un Naruto plus intelligent et inventif .

There are a lot of gramatical errors and misspelling thats for sure, however im interested in seeing where this goes. You should take some time to look through what you wrote and see if theres a better way to write it. Readin it outloud can help you find things that dong sound right.

Keep up the good work :)

J'ai bien aimé le chapitre.
Pour le couple Naruto/temari me va très bien .
Je n'aime pas quand Naruto est associé avec des filles de konoha.

Franchement j'ai adoré.
J'attends la suite avec impatience.