very enjoyable chapter and glad to see you continue this story, can't wait to see the next chapter, poor Claire.

Wow, what an awesome story so far. I don't think I've read one with Claire being infected with the Code: Veronica virus yet, so this one is quite entertaining. The pace is good and pretty balanced, and I do enjoy the details. Maybe it's just me, but I do like longer chapters. Personal preference;) In any case, well done. Update soon! - Lil V.

Ooohh! You're bacc. I tought you're not coming back. Keep it up!

Interesting start.

Not a bad premise but there's some grammatical issues here and there. There's some more things so just PM me.

yay, you updated! Another intense and great chapter!

wow, good story, can't wait to see more

I liked this chapter hope to see you updated again soon

Great chapter I can't believe to read more

Great start please keep updating

You got I'm hooked and thank you for saying that Claire didn't have feelings for Steve. It was always a brother/sister one sided love to me, love your writing.

I like how you started the story. I think it could be a great story. Just next time you upload a chapter make sure you don't have those random letters in the middle of it. Also be sure to double check your paragraphing. They was no paragraphing. So keep up the good work and just remember to paragraph.

Kind of hard to read. I think the doc mananager wasn’t set to story mode. I think if it gets fixed you will get more activity. Hope this helps and happy writing!

You need to fix your chapter. Whatever writing program you were using has messed it all up and added in what should have been font changes.