Stop the bigoted shit man,that's got nothing to do with pc culture. You're just coming across like an asshole

Overall I liked . At first I didn’t know what I was getting into but as it went all I enjoyed it more an more bro. Keep on writing cause I always read your material ! Well done

I liked the setup. I look forward to next chap.

It's really good and very descriptive. Just I would like to see more C.C., also you need to calm down with the yaoi.

that was quite hot.
I suppose some elaborate Lelouchian scheme to get Milly while somehow getting back at Kallen would be pretty cool.

Not one for Yaoi, but comraderie is something I liked in this chap. and the last. I look forward to when you have them go after there crushes/targets.

Hahaha

bro. you have an awful lot of attitude saying other lemon fics fail in comparison to yours. this is subpar at best

if u wanna see what actual writing skill looks like, see this
s/13030800/1/The-Night-a-Phantom-Was-Born

i think its the best code geass lemon out there. never seen a story written like it before. take tips y dont u

mnot saying what you wrote totally sucks. ive seen much much worse. but dont just presume its the best out there