I’m really enjoying this so far I would love to see this continued, good job so far.

10/10

I like what your doing. I have been looking for many what if’s about Broly and this one is the most intriguing I’ve seen. Not many people can come up with ways to change his story. I’m getting a real future Guardian of the universe vibe from broly and I really like that. Also why is the supreme Kai a girl? I might have just missed something but it dose not really matter. I like this so if your able to please continue when your able to. I feel like this could really become something

When are you going to update "Vengeance of Daimao"? That was my favorite Piccolo fic.

will this broly have access to the wrath state?

Poor Frieza, and his family. All they wanted to do was be rulers of the universe, but haters gonna hate. It's just really sad, you know?

I liked this. I enjoyed most of where it went. I'm always on the side of Broly being a blood hungry murdering monster, but I can live with that not being the case (At least, probably not being the case) :P

interesting and updated soon

good start

I like this, a lot. But I'm a bit confused with Supreme Kai, is this the Western Supreme Kai? If so, I think it might be good to make that more clear.

If everything goes well, Broly will be a powerful match for Making Buu, BUT! If everything goes bad, the Supreme Kai will be devastated by having to face Broly

I'm guessing that is the western supreme kai ( the female kai ) ? And aww it seems broly has a new mom. I think being a mother will be good for her. Because she obviously needs something thanks to all the tragedy she's obviously suffered. I shudder to think how powerful broly will be with proper training. Broly will be able to realize his full potential under the kai's. This is a very interesting story.

This is interesting will we see broly fight Majin Buu in this story and is it possible for broly to be paired up with chornoa (supreme kai of time) I know she's way to old for him and all but I don't think she's ever been paired up with broly before and would sort of make an interesting pair that's just my opinion

I like this ruthless Supreme Kai. I've been rewatching the Buu saga in my off hours, and I've never had an urge to strangle a fictional character more than the Supreme Kai.

I'm a little shocked you didn't start with how differently things went between the Kaioshin and Kid Buu.

that was really good

This seems interesting I wonder how broly will turn out from being raised by Kais instead of his father.