Reviews for The Youkai
GhostRider00 chapter 2 . 4/13
More please update soon please Can’t wait to read the next chapter
Luis Felipe Gonzalez chapter 2 . 2/25
Nice
Wolvenstrom chapter 2 . 2/23
This looks interesting so far.

And I'm kind of relieved to see a harem fic that doesn't involve at least one sister.

So I'm going to keep reading.
nuuo chapter 2 . 2/23
Chapter was fun! An OC who's a love interest is fun, but I kinda want to see the reason why the sisters are treating Lincoln worse and worse over the years. The first chapter's spoilers in the A/N explains it but some of us still wanna see it.
ShadowUzumaki55 chapter 2 . 2/22
Glad to see this is coming back. Now Lincoln has to train himself to control and master his new powers. Now Lincoln can transform into a Kitsune and use fox fire, though he needs to get a better handle on it. Well, he's just getting started, so I can't wait to see what happens next.
OmegaDelta chapter 2 . 2/22
Wonder how longhis family will continue to push him away and how long will it take them to realize this screw up? Keep up the good work.
lampe.andrew1 chapter 2 . 2/22
Been awhile since I have seen this story. Maybe another girl to add to the harem could be Paige from L is for Love. I know she was practically a one time character at best but perhaps you could use what little knowledge about her as an advantage. She could be a half yokai herself. Another girl to add could be Leni. You said that Lincoln is short, so imagine if Leni was snuggling with Lincoln while in his Kitsune form with a deadpan expression from Lincoln of course.
Gamelover41592 chapter 2 . 2/22
this has potential let's see where this goes
HKShadow714 chapter 2 . 2/22
Good to hear that you're back at it, Always believed that this story had potential; it was just a matter of when it would CONTINUE to do so, So Far So Good, Keep Up The Great Work and Hope To See You In The Near Future!
RawToonage press chapter 2 . 2/22
I like the harem picks so far :)
AbstractedRisqu chapter 1 . 12/11/2018
Harem Master123~

Your fic has great story and promising.

And even though, Lincoln is adopted and I could vote for his sisters.

I kinda got bored with Lori, Leni, Luna, Luan, and Lynn in Lincoln harem. Because lot of fiction out there has use those fives and I have kinda read them all. (No offense to anyone)

So my vote for Lincoln harem;

Girl Jordan, Haiku, Tabby, and Polly Pain. (16 years old)

Carol Pingrey (22), Becky(21), Sam (20), Maggie(18) and Margo (18)

If you need help setting up their situation or how they would fall in love with Lincoln... I could help.. I think ;)

Keep up the good work ;)

And Have a nice day~
draco122 chapter 1 . 9/10/2018
Awesome story love it.
Draco122
T chapter 1 . 8/17/2018
Interesting, though I would like to see the sisters get some powers too, after they apologise their brother.
Fiction Realm chapter 1 . 8/12/2018
As long as there is no incest or Ronnie Anne.. I wonder who is in the harem
nuuo chapter 1 . 8/12/2018
Started off great! I can live with story being a "harem" but also no lemons. Love how it started, love it when stories start with Lincoln dealing with depression from family neglecting him. Powers kinda sounds like Ben 10, I have no clue the range of powers japanese mythical beasts have. I think there are luck based powers from Tanukis, and storm & weather powers, strength based powers from ogres and onis. Fuck the spoiler though man delete it. Can't wait for next chapters!
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