Omg this is amazing! Please continue this story, it’s off to an amazing start. Are you planning on including Klaus’ family at all? I must comment though, from the knowledge both shows gave about Klaus’ character, New Orleans seems more like the spot he would choose since the city itself is already full of magic. But I definitely understand your choice with having him set the haven near mystic falls for the ritual. Keep up the good work!

I'm lined and hooked. Just wow Im speechless of how amazing this is and it's only the first chapter. I really hope you continue this story and update sometime soon when your not busy because this book is EVERYTHING and mean that.

Yes Bonnie, claim your monster! Great start.

Please continue this masterpiece!

This chapter was really good. To me, it feels as if it is the right amount of everything here. I’m excited for the journey Bonnie and Tyler are now on together

Seriously love this story. The cult aspect of it is awesome and hilarious in how cult-ish it is. I do love it though. especially since this story has my two favorite things: Bonnie leaving her friends who took her for granted and klonnie. Amazing story and I would love to see where you take it.

This is not crap! Yes there are a few typos, but this is so good, I don’t care! THIS IS BRILLIANT! PLEASE CONTINUE! Luv it!

Please tell me you plan on updating this. I love that this story is going to focus on Bonnie and her growth with her powers naturally and not via being forced so save her “friends”. Lol that ending speech was very, very cult-ish, but I’m looking forward to seeing more of what it’s like on the inside. Also super looking forward to the klonnie.

This is really great, awesome, wonderful, INTRIGUING, and needs to be updated ASAP! Please! I sincerely enjoyed this — the supernatural aspects, Bonnie’s power, Klaus’ power, the extravagance of Safe Haven, and Mason, Tyler, and Greta’s roles in everything! This story is very unique with its disdain for the Salvatore’s, Elena, AND CAROLINE! I really appreciate that characteristic! They ALL definitely treated Bonnie pretty crappy at least 3 times during the series! I’m ALL for her and the new order versing the Scooby gang chumps! LET’S GO! I wanna see Bonnie get everything she deserves! First and foremost a RIDICULOUSLY POWERFUL, SINFULLY SEXY OLDER MAN, ORIGINAL HYBRID! LETS GO! And I’m SO BEYOND ready for the smut by the way! Wild and undomesticated! Let Klonnie be one of those couples getting it on outside in front of everyone! Or perhaps maybe just in front of the appalled Scooby Gang, in a later chapter?! I would get my LIFEEE! Anyhow! Update soon please! This brilliant opener severely teased on the Klonnie side of things and has me thirsty for MOREEE!

I'm hooked! I love the camaraderie between Bonnie and Tyler, I hope it continues as they join Safe Haven. Hopefully you update this soon

Can't wait to read more!

loved this intro! can't wait for what's to come

I don't think you need to rewrite this, this is already awesome. I can honestly say this is something unique I've never seen before and I like where you're going with it. I can't wait for klaus and bonnie to interact with each other, hope you update soon.

I love it! During the show I always thought ‘what is the new order?’ But they new went into it. And like how Klaus had his hybrids, vampires, witches and werewolves that worked with him, but what about the one that where loyal to him because they wanted to. Which you have shown. So, keep up the good work, and I can’t wait for more.

I loved this! I wish this could've been the actual show because some of the scenes were so cinematic I could see them in my mind's eye. I love your take on everyone and I love that Bonnie is getting her due! There were a few typos here and there but it didn't take away from the quality of the story. I can't wait for more.