| Reviews for Love At First Sight |
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Guest chapter 3 . 11/23/2019 Still hoping this gets continued |
Guest chapter 3 . 10/16/2019 Interesting take on the Seikirei story. Imagine Minato discovering Matsu's relief sessions. I have no doubt that Uzume would do everything in her power to help Minato. Of course if she wants private time with Minato,she would have to take him to a love motel to avoid a ladle by Miya. Miya could also give Minato lessons on how to be assertive without being a jerk. Please continue this story. |
spitfyre1 chapter 1 . 8/31/2019 Hey, how the hell is he a ronin if he got into school? |
healeroffates chapter 3 . 8/2/2019 I love this please update when you can, and keep up the good work! |
Guest chapter 3 . 7/19/2019 nice need some more of this |
TrueRedDragonGodEmperor chapter 3 . 7/17/2019 Very interesting story and concept. I look forward to your future chapters. |
Lord-of Oceans-Poseidon chapter 3 . 7/6/2019 minato is daredevil?! that's new |
Rosco Peeko Trane chapter 2 . 6/27/2019 This is a great dichotomy you've written. I'm even more interested than before now. Great use of show not tell in your writing. Fantastic character building and interaction thus far. Free of cliche or generic contrivance. Hope you plan to continue with this impressive writing style outside of your day to day life. |
Rosco Peeko Trane chapter 1 . 6/27/2019 I honestly did not see that coming. Usually I do. Got my interest. The pun was not intended believe it or not. Read the AN on the second chapter. Well put. Doesn't need to have a bunch of Sekirei just because. Ruins the story. Glad you plan to make it your own. |
Guest chapter 3 . 5/30/2019 Interesting take on Minato and the whole Seikirei game. Uzume would have to be virtually everything for Minato,to help him see the world around him,and to do whatever she can to last until the end. I can also see Miya and Matsu lending a hand to help Minato. From navigating visual and social cues to keeping him safe. As for Yukari,who is to say she would not get friendly with Uzume or Matsu? I would like to see Minato's other senses explored more. He could be another Daredevil,minus the firefighting. Minato does not seem the type to like to rely on others. Maybe Miya could also train Minato to defend himself and use his other senses to defeat opponents. Like Zatochi (spelling?), an actual blind Master swordsman. I like the story and want it to continue. Please forgive the long review. |
OnTheCobb chapter 3 . 5/25/2019 Awesome, another Chapter! ... And now we wait... In all seriousness, take your time. I really like the story concept, but if you got other stories to do, it's fine. Just so long as you keep revisiting this story every now and again... or else explain in an Author's Note why you won't be revisiting it again. Still enjoying this story. |
twisterblake2015 chapter 3 . 5/22/2019 Epic |
spitfyre1 chapter 3 . 5/22/2019 Cant wait for more! Keep up the good work |
Mike Kromer chapter 3 . 5/22/2019 Must have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next. Discussions are hard indeed, especially from the heart lol. |
TigerJacob chapter 3 . 5/21/2019 Pfft haha, I'm almost a hundred percent certain that any Artemis shipper is someone who drunk that fucking cool aid being passed around in the Percy Jackson section of the site. I don't get it, is it because shes a maiden and hates men and therefore the ultimate sway of machoness to get her to convert to dick? Shes not even that nice of a character (which brings us to the other side of the fandom that absolutely hate her (for the record I'd say I lean more torwards dislike when it comes to canon but that could go for alot of the gods) now Hestia on the other hand...that's my ship and I'd be happy to worship my fireplace and snort the ash if it meant shed show up. Hestia bestia. Maybe I'll add to my reviews for the request to add her next time you update. As for next time you update...jeeze 2k feels like what a drug dealer gives to an addict to make them come back more. It lacks substance and yet its quite good. Had to remind myself who else was in the harem besides uzume (and I must state again I'm so glad shes in it) its been quite a while. But I can understand IRL has its bumps so no worries on that, hopefully smooth sailing comes soon so we can see some development on this or dxd (though I prefer this at the moment since I've got other fics covering dxd and only seerking reliably on this one (and seer takes foreeeeever)). Thanks for the read. |