Reviews for It Only Hurts When I Breathe
OhBuddy66 chapter 1 . 8/13/2018
I enjoyed Miles Between Us and was happy to see this pop up. Great job giving us Kensi's view here. I'm looking forward to your post-ep! Thanks for sharing!
writeallnight chapter 1 . 8/11/2018
Our poor babies! Loving the depth you're giving them. Sometimes there is no easy answer. Beautiful work as always!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/10/2018
Kensi doesn't love Deeks more than life itself. She loves the job more than life itself. I think she wants to love Deeks but her actions say that she doesn't.
BettyD1989 chapter 1 . 8/10/2018
Love your stories so much. Can't wait for your post-ep.
Hope to read more of you soon.
anonkp chapter 1 . 8/10/2018
Excellent. Now I really want to read your take on the post-ep!
gremlin2318 chapter 1 . 8/9/2018
Loved this just as much as the first two times I read it. You capture both the heartache and the love so well. I sure hope your post-ep is ready soon. I'm dying over here! :)

Kaytie
UsedToBeMe chapter 1 . 8/9/2018
wow,
I love the way you write them. I can actually hear the words in my head when i read it. The conflicting emotions are just so intense it is amazing. Their words, and actions seem so real and organic. It is heartbreaking, but you always leave them on a positive note. Even when things aren't great between them, you give them hope. Thank you as always.
Max and Fern 4ever chapter 1 . 8/9/2018
This was really good. While the episode had Kensi OOC this was more like canon to me.