| Reviews for Spider-King: Conquest of Shadows |
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WolfassassinKing chapter 10 . 7/20 Isn’t the Phoenix still bounded to Hope? And didn’t she get the biggest case of hero worship for Spidey after one conversation? |
Alfa123 chapter 10 . 7/14 Loved it really hope to see more from you in the future |
Marvel Master chapter 10 . 7/12 Not to sound like a misogynistic a-hole, but you should watch how much “sass/attitude” the girls show Peter, given that he’s both their God-King and their Master/lover. A little is fine, so long as they essentially keep it in check. And given that many of the girls likely already had high yet often repressed libidos and were sexually prolific when in relationships even before being “Conquered”, you should make it a point to emphasize that Peter has an active sex life with each of them even when he isn’t actively “Conquering” new girls. Both out of a desire from the females to “satisfy the needs of their king”, as well as Peter’s desire to both have sex and to “reward the females for their dutiful loyalty”. Besides, it seems a little wasteful for Peter to claim theses girls only to almost never have sex after their initial debut. If you’re taking votes on who’s next to be conquered, I say Scarlet Witch. She is ridiculously hot and single, has a crappy love life that could use help, and her immense and special powers will be extremely necessary in the future to the point that she is likely gonna be Peter’s next priority target. In terms of significance to Peter’s plans, overall power and/or skills, and exceptional beauty/sex-appeal, these are the females Peter needs to prioritize as his next top targets, in order of priority: Scarlet Witch Domino (a bit of an odd choice, but she’s hot and her good-luck powers are gonna be useful) Jessica Drew/Spider-Woman Black Widow Captain Marvel She-Hulk Storm Polaris Rogue Susan Storm |
Theslytherinking chapter 10 . 7/12 I loved how Tony thought spidey was just a normal symbiote not the god and king of a race that been around since the creation of the universe. Tony thought he may actually have a chance that's funny |
OMAC001 chapter 10 . 7/13 Interesting idea at the end 'bringing back' some of the deceased symbiotes. Now all that's left is Scorn, Scream, and maybe Carnage as an antagonist (possibly a Norman Osborn/Cletus Cassidy hybrid?). |
Dragonfan6 chapter 10 . 7/13 So not only does Spidey got to worry about trying to build his symbiote army without alerting all other hero teams, he's got to worry about a cosmic fire chicken coming back with unknown intentions...Well good luck Pete. Thanks for another great chapter, and looking forward to the next. Also on a side note how is it that Peter remembers about his retconned marriage? Did I miss something from previous chapters or something? |
MasterOfDragonsGod chapter 10 . 7/12 Thanks for the chapter |
DxD-Supreme chapter 10 . 7/12 This was a great chapter. Screw Scott Summers and all his BS. Hell, a part of me thinks Peter should take the time to have a foursome with Jean, Emma, and Psylocke, with the potential to become a full-blown orgy by including Madelyne Pryor, Rachel Grey, and even Hope just to spite Scott (although maybe not with Scott actually watching, as it isn’t really that entertaining to have another guy watch as the MC screws his girls). It’s mostly a symbolic gesture, to say “F**K you, Scott! All the Summers’ B**ches belong to me, now and forever!”, and it would be full-circle for the Summers Family if you also included Polaris (to spite both Havok AND Magneto). FYI, though: I’m pretty sure in regards to the Jean Love Triangle, Logan’s feelings were largely one-sided and Jean never got intimate with him. I agree with Omni-Creator about Wanda Maximoff/Scarlet Witch. She is FAR more powerful than most give her credit for, easily capable of reshaping the entire Multiverse if pushed enough, and she’s easily the 2nd biggest Wild Card in Marvel, surpassed only by Peter Parker himself. Besides, if Peter is to stand a chance against the Phoenix Force or any other Cosmic or Mystical Beings that could pose a potential threat to Peter’s plan, Wanda’s powers and potential, along with her aid, with be necessary and a TOP PRIORITY. Plus, she’s ridiculously hot, has crappy luck that rivals Peter’s, and has a crappy love life too, so it fits. So if you’re still open to suggestions, you NEED to make Wanda the next big priority, both to prevent her from easily upending Peter’s plans via Universal/Multiversal-level Magic and to prepare for the long-term. |
Omni-Creator Kami of Anime chapter 10 . 7/12 Well done on this chapter, I am proud that you are keeping some standards to your lemons and that you won’t do any excessive stuff. Peter’s the Alpha, so to speak, so he should enjoy the full-perks of it singlehandedly. Also, even though Peter will be focusing a lot of time on “conquering” others, don’t ignore the existing females or relegate any future intimacy with to only implied or background sex. Personally, I think it would be hot if Peter had a threesome with Felicia and Emma Frost, or a foursome with Jean, Emma, and Psylocke. But if you do, remember: no excessive stuff like clones/copies, tentacles, or fake symbiote dicks. I don’t know how to feel about the Rachel thing, mostly because the fact that she’s an adult implies that Peter is old, like late 30s at the youngest, even if his latent Spider-abilities gave him a prolonged youth and extended lifespan. Either way, there’s a lot of women who still need to be “conquered”. Jessica Drew/Spider-Woman, Black Widow, Carol Danvers, Wanda Maximoff, She-Hulk, Storm, Susan Storm, Rogue, Rachel Gray, Polaris, etc. And as Peter’s Queens, preferably (aside from maybe Polaris, they all deserve to be Queens). The ordeal with the Phoenix will be interesting. Unless Peter can somehow tap into the full dormant power of Knull (who is actually far more powerful than you initially portrayed him as and could easily be in the Top 10 strongest beings of all time in the Multiverse), and “Conquer” Wanda soon, he won’t stand a chance. Unlike MCU Wanda, who is heavily Nerfed and only has Psionic capabilities, the REAL Wanda Maximoff possesses probability manipulation via hex bolts and also possesses the unique and EXCLUSIVE capability of Chaos Magic, which transcends all other forms of magic and can perform impossible feats that no other forms of magic, including manipulating Reality in a way and scale unlike any other Magic. But more importantly, it’s shown as one of the few weaknesses that the Phoenix Force possesses. This, coupled by the fact that Wanda is the Nexus Being of the Multiverse (meaning she’s a natural conduit for all the dimensional and/or mystical energies of the Multiverse), mean that not only will Peter become the ultimate Magic-user and Reality-Warper, but when used in conjunction with the Telepathy and Telekinesis Peter has, will help him subdue the Phoenix Force to comply with his goals if absolutely necessary while bonding it with Jean. It’s why it’s absolutely CRITICAL that Peter “Conquers” Wanda and makes her one of his most important “Queens” ASAP: to better hold his own against the Phoenix, along with any other Mystical or Cosmic Threats, that could ruin his plans. Besides, her powers and potential make her an even bigger wild-card than anyone else, one that Peter NEEDS to deal with quickly. Plus, Peter could be the person who can heal the supposed “mental instability” and constant ostracization that Wanda endures from others, including most Mutants, and with both his Pheromones and Telepathy, it won’t take much to seduce her. |
Arraia chapter 10 . 7/12 Perfect and update soon please |
Death Fury chapter 10 . 7/12 excellent chapter |
spanky1988.awj chapter 10 . 7/12 Can't wait for chapter 11 and chapter 12! |
I am vegito chapter 10 . 7/12 wow just wow |
CRUDEN chapter 10 . 7/12 Peter could probably get control of Atlantis through Namora, who is Namor's cousin. Plus Namora is underused. |
George1892 chapter 9 . 6/28 I think Sue Storm has definitely got to he included, perhaps much like Gwen was and kept undercover to keep an eye on Reed or distract him. Maybe Carol Danvers and She-Hulk too as Pete will need some heavy hitters. |