| Reviews for First Battle After Timeskip |
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Criis46 chapter 4 . 7/19 Loved it. Can’t wait to read the next chapter |
Smiley-Nami chapter 4 . 7/19 This is interesting. Continue when you can. |
SakuraS41 chapter 4 . 7/18 Thank you for the update! Definitely looking forward to their great escape! Hope all goes well for your studies! |
ChunkyFunkyMunky chapter 2 . 7/18 It is a pity that Luffy did not bring any Impel Down inmates with him to make his awesome entry, especially Jimbei. |
ChunkyFunkyMunky chapter 1 . 7/18 It is cringey that you have mixed speech with Romaji. |
Burning Moonlight chapter 5 . 7/17 This was a dumb thing to do. Why post a update to say that you are deleting? I feel like an idiot for even pointing this shit out. |
Schey-Drin Abusaman chapter 5 . 7/17 you could update/write during your free time you know |
Cielo140292 chapter 4 . 7/11 waahh.. what happen next? update more please! |
Guest chapter 4 . 5/24 Nononononono! You cant just end with a Cliffhanger! Why must you be so cruel,Author-san!? Why...!? WHY!? |
Messitoe chapter 4 . 1/2 I can't wait for an update don't rush it though. I hope you're doing well in kuni :) |
yuzukikuran476 chapter 4 . 5/14/2019 well done Nami and Zoro and Franky and chopper saved and free ace and am glad shanks and his crew shown up and those stupid 3 Admirals better not have harmed luffy and his brothers. |
yuzukikuran476 chapter 3 . 5/14/2019 yep, luffy and his crew and whitebeard and his crew and Rayleigh are awesome Pirates and luffy you are going to be Pirate King. |
yuzukikuran476 chapter 2 . 5/14/2019 well done with this chapter and I enjoy reading it and am surprised that Sabo and Rayleigh showed up which am glad and luffy and his crew look totally badass and awesome at fighting their enemies and please update. |
yuzukikuran476 chapter 1 . 5/14/2019 Thank you Author-San for making this a one piece story with Luffy and his crew going to save ace and please keep ace and whitebeard alive in this story and its Shichibukai and am surprised that Rayleigh didn't show up to help luffy and his crew and whitebeard saved Ace. how come there is no Time travel with Marco and Luffy and Law or even Luffy and his crew and Rayleigh saving ace Stories or even Fanfiction stories about Luffy's mother? like luffy mother could be fellow D as well like: Gol D Female or Slivers D Female or Kozuki D Female or even Jaguar D female and Newgate D female or on fanfiction website. |
alice.fazio13 chapter 4 . 4/17/2019 Please update |