Aw, Jounochi is a sweetheart.

This series was very heartwarming, I will miss it a lot : ) It was really nice that you used Jounouchi a bit more positively than in your other fics in the end, since the role you usually have him play is kind of negative. It's a pity, since manga!Jounouchi is the bravest and kindest chatacter besides Yuugi (he fought to death with a guy to protect Yuugi, c'mon -among other things). However, due to the influence from the anime, it's weird to find good explorations of the character... I feel like they bastardized him a lot.
But I'm digressing. It was a pleasure to read your fic, as always, pretti! Really original idea and interesting development. Will be looking forward for more updates!

ive been following this story from the beginning of the series and the ending was good but it also feels rushed and sloppy and there were some parts when it wasn’t smooth writing. The ending was very sudden and in this chapter there was a lot of changes in pov and i made the story feel very rushed. But it was. A Good ending so thank you for writing ;)
Ps kaiba is so bad for f***ing Yami like that, too rough and too fast, heheheh it was hot but poor Yami

This chapter was over all good but I hope you don't mind me saying but there are not enough kisses in this chapter.

I'm sad this is the end but I guess the story did what it was supposed to do. Great story.

aww that is so nice that Atem & Yugi are back together & Yugi doesnt think he an AI anymore

Dios! Que capítulo,
Esta vez me referiré a las notas de autor, en primer lugar no entiendo para que lee la gente ultra sensible que no aprecia el buen detalle en las historias, si, suelen ser temas fuertes y muy bien descritos, pero lo dicen las advertencias entonces, creo que les faltan neuronas para comprender, y luego se quejan? Vaya...
En lo que a mi respecta la historia está estupenda y ya muero de ganas de leer el capítulo próximo, Yugi hirió los sentimientos de Atem, también lo hicieron los demás, solo espero que se den cuenta o Seto les diga o que las cosas fluyan y todo se arregle.
Este capítulo me dejó demasiado feliz!
Quiero más !

who cares if Atem looks 16 hes actually 5016 so it makes no difference , cant wait for the Prideshipping Lemon, yummy

Ah! My heart! Yugi’s reaction is so real though... and Kaiba’s jealousy...
Love you Ugli and any hate you get on the next chapter (I’ll be your sponge ;) )

QueenB

Can't wait to see how atem is going to face the Yugi-gang

This chapter was really interesting. Can't wait to see the conversation between Atem and the gang. Also can't wait to see if you update Eight-Sided Shape. Good luck!

It's been a while, I couldn't read before, only yesterday I managed to do it.
This impressive! Atem is finally there! I can't believe it, and Kaiba like he's always an idiot, he's got it next door, he cares about age? (OK, it is a problem, is the age of Mokuba, but it is Atem, the Pharaoh) and is hurting to be away, the return to him, it is not fair to take away less now that is so confused, I want to kiss, just as you want Atem , that will protect you not just keep it there, without even giving you company. In addition Yugi, is not helping to act like this, it will scare, everything is complicated (and I love going) to all this, how much has happened? That is to say if one night was a year for Seto, how much was for Atem with a year and a half? I hope that Kaiba has no more than 23 because there would understand the reason for the distance but do not want, please have separated them so much, and let them be happy I want Pride love this chapter, the two in fact, when you update? I missed this feeling and I need my dose XD
Speaking of something else, what you mentioned eight-sided, you know I still dream of seeing the continuation? It would be the best of this world if you decide to continue it

This was hilarious. And you ARE evil. I can't wait to see how this turns out.

very good so far , ive been keeping up with your updates, cant wait for the next ch