Cute!

aw this one was cute!

So, so sweet. Loved it.

AHHHHH SO CUTE

My heart melted into a good mess. Yes, that was a pun. A bad pun. Very well written.

I really loved where Remus was trying to read his letters. At first I was a little confused, but once I realized what was happening it was a very cute moment! My one recommendation would be to possibly make that clearer in the beginning of that part. Maybe you can mention how hes been trying to get a job, or that he had opened a letter to read. But either way, this is such a wonderful story. Its very straightforward and simple which really works here. I absolutely love Remus being obsessed with chocolate to the point that it literally makes him fuzzy. Very sweet story! Nice job!

Dear Moon:

I absolutely love Remus's attempt to read the letter. (That last line, especially: you can just picture the clients saying, "Let's see, we can practice toleration of werewolves, or we can eat chocolate…") Beautiful. Thank you.

Sincerely,
Qoheleth

*squeals* this is amazing! you wrote it really well

Amazing this was great.