| Reviews for The Immortal Sage |
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   2B x 9S chapter 9 . 7/15 nice i read the manga it was good |
| tempace chapter 9 . 1/23 muy interesante la historia, espero que la continúes algún día |
| huongdaoroma chapter 2 . 11/28/2019 Ye Mo Orochimaru 2.0 ? XD |
| Dimitrisix chapter 9 . 7/12/2019 Update please... This is awesome story |
| nitewolf423 chapter 9 . 4/18/2019 Novel |
| Aclux chapter 9 . 11/23/2018 interesting really interesting, continue this masterpiece I can not wait to see the next chapters |
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/13/2018 Also the whole notion of Naruto mind controlling feels weird however it does seem possible I've read a story known as Eroninja where Naruto learns a jutsu that uses his chakra to arouse women and they eventually fall for the blonde, not like mind control but rather slowly getting the girl into him. You could actually do something similar to that as the Naruto in that story wasn't using it to "conquer" but rather to unite the girls and eventually the nations. Just an idea |
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/13/2018 Loved this series, but I gotta agreed with chilypepper down there if your gonna add a large harem then just do it this whole notion of him not liking the girls is very wack especially since he said he wants to be with them. Also yea if you can add Ye Ziyun into his harem she is mystified by him already and the while notion of being "siblings" is very weak (almost feels like how some authors make Naruto and Hinata think of each other as siblings just cause which I find to be very weird and forced). This feels the same way especially since Naruto has interacted with Ye Ziyun way more than Nie li (original mc who hasn't even appeared) |
| bladetri chapter 9 . 9/27/2018 like XD |
| R-king 93 chapter 9 . 9/26/2018 Nicely done with this chapter. |
| Arraia chapter 9 . 9/25/2018 perfect and update soon please |
| bladetri chapter 8 . 9/6/2018 like XDD |
| Specterchilypepper chapter 8 . 9/6/2018 Well I am not a fan of Digimon (I sometimes saw the anime when I was a little kid and it didn't appeal to me ) but I can see that outside of you liking the franchise it is also a good way to put stronger foes for Naruto (even though the "final boss" of tales of demons and gods should be absurdly strong). There is only one thing that I think you should avoid: Naruto trying to "pyryfing" everyone and their cousins because it is already a little bit tiring at least for me. Another thing , in an AN you wrote about having some girls fall in love with him and for Naruto to not feel the same: I don't see the point of something like that I think it would only add unneeded chaos . If you want him to have an harem even a big one go for it: emperors had huge harem and in xancia novels, harems (even big ones) aren't unheard of ,considering how there is immortality and it is used the notion that more powerfull a man is and the more he will attract women. If you choose a big harem I already wrote some of the girls that I would want in it in a previous review and I want to add to them ye ziyun and hangua lanruo. Thank you for your work and until next update. |
| Specterchilypepper chapter 4 . 9/6/2018 I love your story ...infact I am loving all of your xanxia/xanhua crossover that I have read until now. Your grammar maybe imperfect(not that I am an expert lol) but you make up with your ideas and plotline. A question is it possible to add other girls in the harem? (I am thinking about yang xin and a few girls of the draconic ruin realm and the adopted daughter of the Lord of the netherworld realm). Thank you for your work. |
| Arraia chapter 8 . 9/6/2018 perfect and update soon please |
