More? Please? It felt so real. I loved it.

You've done a great job capturing their voices and setting up an intriguing storyline. I'd love to read more.

Having just caught the recent episode I guess I will amend my statement about the dream... still looking forward to more on this! ;D

Love this! Seems fairly in character to me and a stimulating plot... the dream sounds a bit outlandish for anyone to think it could be a memory (IMHO... mostly the maze and the black eyes...since this show seems to be firmly set in the real world of average happenings) but as a nightmare it certainly does the trick. I look forward to more whenever you get the chance to write!

Please continue. :) This was really good :)

I too, took to Eddie and Sam right away. They are awesome. All the characters are great. I hope ABC does the right thing and renews this show, and for a full season too! We need more then 13 episodes.
I hope you continue this story. This first chapter was good, very well written, and IMO, you got the characters spot on.

Will look forward to when you add to this story.