Reviews for A Queen's Request
Momijifan Low-Ki chapter 1 . 7/25/2019
The queen is a freaky MILF in bed, wasn't she?
IROCK108 chapter 1 . 2/25/2019
noice.
Nachos chapter 1 . 1/19/2019
This is a very good story and despite the unusual pairing, you made it work very well. I like it a lot.

However there were a number of spelling and grammar errors e.g in the last bit of dialogue "LOTS" doesn't need an apostrophe.

I think this fic just needs to be proofread but other than that it's great.
Axi5 chapter 1 . 10/12/2018
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, eh okay pretty good.
ReaperJ chapter 1 . 10/7/2018
HA... I'm so pissed I didn't see this sooner, would have never seen if you didn't make the follow up to this. I think everyone was in charter, maybe wish Marco was a little more manly seeing how he's really 31.

All and all, really liked how everything worked out and followed along the show, damn fine work and I'm ready to read the next half!
The Howling Behemoth chapter 1 . 9/10/2018
Glad to see more Moonco!
biob1 chapter 1 . 9/1/2018
Great work
JRC1700 chapter 1 . 8/19/2018
GREAT story! I loved Marco's little "deal with the devil" :)

I don't suppose I could talk you into writing a sequel? Maybe one that involves Moon "teaching" Star how to please her fiance?
NHarem Foreva chapter 1 . 8/21/2018
I’d like a continuation, actually show how they get together and how Marco keeps Moon satisfies all the while. I’d love it it Moon also got pregnant with Marco’s child at some point.
Smiling Lemon chapter 1 . 8/12/2018
Some secret sexy fun and I loved it!
jarod237 chapter 1 . 8/9/2018
Quick question will there be more of this. Im askimg for a friend
Radpoison101 chapter 1 . 8/7/2018
You should continue this
paolotejadaj chapter 1 . 8/7/2018
This pairing is surprisingly good, great story too
Grey chapter 1 . 8/7/2018
Standing ovation* Moon doesn’t get enough love, and while I ship Starco and Moon x River, who could honestly resist Marco? Dude is a harem king, well done with the story, Gonna have to look for more of your stuff.
Majinbuu7985 chapter 1 . 8/7/2018
Pretty hot man, I was worried what was going to happen but I shouldn’t have been seeing as you are a A Starco shipper like me, maybe hoping we can get a follow up chapter with Marco doing it with Star and Moon joining in (or Eclipsa). Seriously though I have to ask-and you can answer me in another chapter or a pm, do you honestly believe Starco is gonna happen in the show? Cause honestly I am starting to lose hope at this point. Looking forward to more soon.
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