Reviews for First Time
Kanta48 chapter 2 . 8/11/2018
Again, another great chapter. Love your humour. As I have said before, your Alistair is perfect. I did have some trouble reading it because of the p class"p6" etc. I think there were a few words missing at the end of sentences. But in spite of that, I still enjoyed this warm funny short story. Hope to see more from you.
Kanta48 chapter 1 . 8/6/2018
How wonderful to have you back. This story is so Alistair. I loved it. Will you be writing more about Alistair and Talia? I can only hope.