Noooooooo kill troll jim

Personally I have really enjoyed the way this story has been written. I hope you think about continuing it as it is at an interesting point and I would like to see where you would go with it.

i think this is the first time someone has ever compared draal to sonic the hedgehog

bro.
this is so good thank you for writing this-
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im fangirling so hard this is perfect
*excited screaming*

Really enjoyed the story, I think you’re being a little to hard on yourself but then again who isn’t. Anyway the point is I’ll be looking forward to any updates you do.

I thought he learned his lesson!

I'm interested in seeing if clair herself will be in Jims dreams now.

I laughed through most of this chapter, it was really good!

At least Jim is smarter about telling others about the probably suicidal solo trip he wants to make.

Wonderful chapter.

I am beyond impressed by your story, and while I loved it and wish you had continued it- I can understand why you stopped.

I can’t wait to read what else you have written.

Thank you for writing this story!
Im looking forward to the 'overhauled' version

It is one of the best stories that I have read if some authors have their criticisms but still end them by those who stabbed their story at the beginning and end but I hope you finish it or do 2 part as in the series

This story was truly amazing I'm sorry that you feel it wasn't

I enjoyed this,I need to watch the series