Nothing about this 'Dumbledore' person in this chapter has any relation to Albus Dumbledore whatsoever. I think the recording fucking Snape was more in line with Dumbledore than... whatever this drek is.

"It was fine setting your friends and family up to be murdered, but when it's me and mine, that's a step too far!"

Harry: "Sound legit."

That list of people important to him is missing a person...

Sigh.

Who am I kidding, you've probably turned Ginny into either a Slut or a fangirl.

your story is definitely one of the better ones on this website and i hope you continue.

some errors here and there but nothing too off putting,l ans most of the usual fanfiction plotholes got their own explanation.

the harem thing is obviously completely unnecessary, cringy and those parts read like a thirteen year-old fantasy, but i guess that's just the nature of harem stories.

Please continue this amazing story!

more :)

What a ridiculous ff this shit is. A total garbage. You have some nerve to write this absolute garbage saying it is inspired from the masterpiece I am here. Rape is happening all around. Everyone else is useless. No one can do anything. What a shit this ff is. There is a reason why I am still here is one of the most popular ff. But looks like u thought why not write a total garbage ff with stupid characters by trying to copy that ff and then adding some garbage in to this ff so that it will not come as total rip off but a complete garbage . This has to be worst inspires ff I have ever read. Such disgusting ff like this should be deleted from this site.

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Many similarities to another fic. The story is very slow when it comes to progressing the way it’s going. Everyone but Harry is basically useless when it comes to a fight elder wand Dumbledore isn’t doing anything useful. What’s the point of having lily and Hardwin Potter? They really don’t make much a difference or have much of a role aside from the prophecy. Romance is nonexistent just lust fueled romance with only daphne and hermione who seem to have more genuine feelings towards Harry. Fleur aside from her looks has a unattractive personality of being so forward and really open minded in sex with liking both witches and wizards if I was Harry I would be put off even more so since you stated Harry didn’t like that sort of thing. Overall I just can’t read this story anymore just not my cup of tea.

this chapter was stupid because of the thing with hermione

this really is worse wersion of Im still Here

mc name is the same aswell Ares Flamel

this fanfic feels/ is partly like the Fanfiction named Im still here.

fawkes wasent originally Dubledores

so... Harry's thinks revenge rape and mutilation is an appropriate punishment? In fact, his "justice" seemed to be to do worse to the guy while asking "well, how do YOU like it?" I suppose it sets the tone for a willing to do anything to save the people he loves kind of a protagonist but it also sets the tone for an amoral, cruel one.

That's fine for the story, which is otherwise very enjoyable, but becomes frustrating. I'm getting whiplash reading about Harry caring deeply about people and protecting them from abuse, sexual or otherwise, only to immediately and horrifically go to him abusing an individual physically and sexually. I get that Harry wasn't sexually motivated, but that doesn't change the fact that he forced a 17-inch wooden dildo down whatever his name was's throat for hours on end.

Obviously, none of this is in defence of the rapist's actions. But if the appropriate punishment for forcing a girl to her knees and making her give a blowjob is to be tortured, castrated, and be forced to deepthroat something that's been made deliberately bigger (to prove a point?) for an undisclosed amount of time (presumably over night) is to have the same action occur to you but worse, what punishment does Harry deserve for escalating? further escalation?

I suppose the context of Harry's actions are important. He's not raping someone, he's just teaching a rapist a lesson... by raping them indirectly... You could call it justice, but really Harry seemed more motivated by appeasing his Hate and sadism. I remember one sentence about how his magics are getting all riled up because of how much he's reveling in the torture? Harry is getting ready to viscerally enjoy the action of popping open someone's balls (more of a burst than a pop, i guess) and is taking away pleasure from that action? Here are a few synonyms to the word revel; to take joy in, enjoy, be entertained by, love, adore, savor, relish, luxuriate in.
I get the idea of poetic justice as well as the whole eye for an eye ideal, but I can't accept it. If harry's idea of a fun night is luxuriating in a spot of ball busting I'm not too interested in reading more. The main character sadistically mutilating a 14? 15? year old bothers me.
Maybe I just don't like the idea of ball busting in general. probably both.