FINALLY got all caught up and let me tell you, this chapter is what I needed in my life! So thank you for editing/republishing up to here. This is my first time reading this story and I'm thoroughly impressed if I haven't made that abundantly clear. Absolutely LOVE your rendition and Keira with her long hair / Daxter eith his understanding moments / Jak grappling with PTSD and letting others in / etc. Looking forward to reading more - and above all, please continue to take care of yourself and stay safe during these crazy times!

Noooooooooooooooooooooo! Jak! What are you doooiiiiinnnggg? Yes this is my fourth review in a row. Kind of review? I'm very frustrated with Jak right now - you are such a good author to evoke such an emotional reaction from your audience. And yes at the same time, poor Jak. How am I supposed to stop reading and go to sleep now? I look forward to catching up soon. Jak, pleeeaaaaaase just talk to Keira.

Third review in the last who knows how many hours. First (though this was a while ago), I totally empathize on the 'bad day' and more power to you for channeling your energy into something as positive as this story. The creative liberties taken keep the characters, well, in character (hope that made sense). Also - Keira and Jak! Stop it! Just be together again! Gah! But then I appreciate how you don't rush it and develop the relationship more organically. Ok, time to keep reading (because let's be real, who needs sleep anyway).

Here I am again! Ten hours and three chapters later! If I didn't have any plans today I would binge read the rest! One thing I found you do rather well is your portrayal of PTSD for all characters. Also - can TOTALLY agree - the KG guard pants and crop top are 100% not sensible in the least. Also, funny story, but I have always wanted to cosplay as a KG (though my dislike for them is real). Anywho, I must away, look forward to reading more of your story later!

Whelp. I am thoroughly sucked into this story. So much that I lost track of time and it is now 2:20 AM to my surprise. I do plan on reading the rest of the story, but I at least wanted to drop a review 8 chapters in and let you know how awesome I think it is! Jake and Daxter will always have a special place in my heart and I 109% appreciate this accurate yet imaginative rendition of Jak II. Cheers!

Beautiful story, please continue

Now I’m finally caught up with the story

I wished you described erol laying back on the table like he did in the game.

I wished you were more descriptive with the fight dark jak had with the kg.

Why were the people of the city were rioting?

I hope dark jak becomes a villain in this story I liked what you did with the vision scene and that’s pretty much it.

I’m curious what site where I can find these fan-arts?

I like how you wrote daxter in this chapter especially in the beginning of the chapter and speaking of Daxter (the game) why not just go on YouTube and watch the cutscenes of the game it has erol and count Veger in it talking to each other.

I wish you were more descriptive with the tanker fight but besides that great chapter.

Great chapter keep up the good work