That is one of the best things I've read but I prefer 1 where blue goes into her hear cycle

What about blues oddl6 large belly?

that still makes me cry and the sad part is that dinosaur was the same one from the first Jurassic park movie

I loved the story, I look forward to new chapters

I'm so excited for the next chapter, and can't wait to se Blue's reaction when she meets the Indoraptor again. That creature is very interest in her indeed, I so want to see what happens next. I'm also worried about the plans the bad guys have left, but they will fall soon or later, after all it's just a matter of time. Your story is amazing, don't give up on it, please. I wish you the best inspiration for this one and all your stories. Bye bye.

I'm really loving this story. Cannot wait to see what happens next.

Your right actually. Charlie got blown up by whoever, echo got blown up by the grill or at least seriously burned and died. And delta got hit off and never seen. I guarantee she was still alive and they left her and took blue. Cause in the 2nd movie blue was calling out and looking for another raptor. Owen did leave her and this chapter made me cry my heart out

This story is very interesting. I found it while browsing DeviantART and I have to say, it's not bad. I am mostly interested to what will happen when Blue and the Indoraptor meet again. I liked the inner dialogue between the two, and the Indo's instant liking to Blue was great. Hope to see more too!

Plus, extra points for little Maisie saving the Dinos.

Oof, i was kinda excited for the story but it's okay if you want to make some changes, i understand that

Ooo, I didn’t even notice the new chapter!

Hi! As I came late to this story and was reading the earlier chapters when it was still hinted that blue was pregnant(like the scene before she eats the parasaurolophus eggs and the scene in the truck when she was injured) I can’t deny I was kinda disappointed when I read on and hit this chapter. But as long as these changes help you I’m good with them. Looking forward to more Indoraptor x Blue interactions in the later chapters!

Please update soon. I love this story. Please make a happy ending. Make the indoraptor mate with blue and have hatchling please. Make all them stay alive forever and together please

Oh. That’s unfortunate. I was really concerned as to what had happened to this story, but I didn’t expect for me to come back only for my browser to say ‘URL no longer valid’. I do agree with a couple of your points, especially the one about the indoraptor being too fluffy way too fast. I had an issue with him thinking it was his fault she was hurt, even though it had been her to attack him in the first place. But anyway I respect the decision, and I wish you luck in creating them again.

Owen didn't abandon her though. She chose not to go with him because she didn't want to be caged again. I think she would still trust him as far as cooperating with him when the need arises.

The important thing is that there will be a happy ending and the indoraptor and blue stay alive forever and together, as mates, and have hatchlings. Please update soon. I love this story