OK! whens Tue update?! I really wanna know what'll happen next! please update! AYE SIR

please...update! aye! please! i want to know what will happen next!

This should be good

Hey its Major Bot Mike hahahaha (haha he is a nice bot :3)

Oh, thats was really good.
Like the bot said, this story is really good, and i think you should continue it ;3

Veri n1c3uy6st0rikK

Well, well, my friend…

HOO-RRAH! 1st Review EVAR, Btches~!

Ok, first off: I see a diamond in the rough here. I legit do. :3 Stories, *any* kind of romantic story starring Yui and Nodoka, is a tremendously hard find amidst this sea of Mitsu and YuiAzu. :P Overrated, all of it.

Thishere is a niiiice breath of fresh air, and such an interesting premise, too~ Ohhh I wonder how this liiiittle challenge will unfold, hmmmm~

This was very, very cute, very silly, and oh so very Yui and Nodoka~ *O* My one and only little criticism...would be...well...my eyes hurt. Like, they literally hurt right now. Reading *all* those blocks o' text...that just hurts my eyes.

So, please, *please*, space your narration properly and better, Ok? LOL Just, dem blocks of text...that hurts the eyes.

So, all in all, I'm very, very~much looking forward to more! This story could shine oh so very beautifully if polished well enough. :3

Mission Start!
Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!