Heyo!

I can’t imagine seeing one of their idols dead, even temporarily, would feel good- Future knowledge or no, it’s a discomforting thought. Voldemort being there, actually in front of them, would be equally disturbing- Like Bobby said, he was a student, too.

God, this is screwed up... I haven’t read the books in a long time, so I sort of forget, sometimes, how horrible the people who thought him dead would’ve felt. How Hagrid would’ve felt, carrying his body to their allies... All those poor people... And for any of them to be ready to stand up and keep fighting after that is amazing, you know? Sorry for rambling, it just kinda hit me.

With any luck, they’ll all be back in their time soon.

Pushback! Thank the lord, I knew they’d make it, but it’s still nerve wracking... And them all pushing through will hopefully give the kids the sense that they really did do the right thing by going back in time.

Guess that would be a pretty powerful sight, huh? For two reasons- The war they’d heard so much about and become involved in is over now, and they won’t have to worry about it again... And it’s kind of a marking point- They all get to go home now, because they succeeded. Their job is done.

Back they go... It is gonna be weird- Adjusting, I mean- But it’s for the best. Poor Lena might be losing the most, though... She really loved her, didn’t she?

Yeesh, he’s making me all warm and fuzzy and ready eyed. I’m gonna miss this.

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A final Neville point of view, hm? Kinda fitting. His worries are rather understandable- I’d be scared too, in his place- But they did make it through alright. Maybe not entirely okay, because they really weren’t dealt a good hand, but they did it and they lived.

Feeling abandoned and upset is understandable, but Neville has a point- They couldn’t have said anything, not really. And besides, it seems they grew to understand.

Guess that was the end... Yeesh.

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I don’t know if I’ve ever been part of a finished SYOC- It feels weird, now, but also fulfilling, you know?

As for other stories... Well, I think you should go with your gut, but you should also take a break! You’ve earned it~

Thanks for writing!
~ AnonChan1

This story was INCREDIBLE, and I look forward to anything you write in the future. Honestly think both ideas are great and that anything written by you will be awesome. It was really cool reading Neville's POV and I have an idea for you. Maybe you could write the last book from the POV of a different character. Example is the story "not from others" by FloreatCastellum. It is the last book written in the perspective of ginny and that was really good, and I think you could do an equally good job with it from a different character's perspective like Neville because you really seem to understand him.
Amazing job, you have real talent.

Oh my, we've reached the end. I feel all warm and fuzzy inside. I'm content, but I wouldn't be against at an epilogue~
I'm usually iffy about Hunger Games syocs, especially since they all die ya know? It'd be nice to see something in the same universe, but maybe not another time travel theme. Or you could do an AU school (cause lets be honest, only ONE American school? C'mon Rowling.)

Anyways, it's been a fun journey! No matter what you decide you'll be seeing me again!

Wow, I honestly can't believe this is over. I feel a little sad, but am really happy for you at the same time. What a weird feeling to have.

I would love an epilogue, but of course, it's totally your choice. I would be happy for you either way.

I'm so glad everyone got out alive and well, and now they're back in their times as well. Seeing them reunite with Neville made me tear up a bit, and it was nice to see Neville's point of view of what had happened after the group went back to their time.

The bond between the group was so awesomely developed throughout the story, and I feel so warm inside seeing how close all fourteen of them are till the very end.

I would DEFINITELY love a new SYOC from you, especially another Harry Potter SYOC. You bet that I'll probably be one of the first people to submit. It's up to you, but I hope to see another work from you soon!

In the simplest terms, I want to congratulate you on finishing this story, and comment on how such an amazing writer you are. This is definitely my favorite SYOC up to date, not only because of how well you've consistently updated but also how you developed character relationships, the plot, and everything. I really admire it. It was a great honor to be involved in an SYOC as great as this, and I hope to hear more from you soon.

Thanks for everything!

I normally like time travel fics but for me there are too many new characters all introduced together, and they interact like American teenagers (which would be fine if they were introduced as such) and the reader has to do too much work to believe in their stated back stories.

brave neville

Sorry! Ahhh I’ve been super busy and just got back from a trip! They kissed finally ahhhhhhh

This is almost as good as the real harry potter. You are an amazing writer with incredible ideas.

Hello hello! I procrastinated on reading this because I’m Scared for my children. Help them.

Yeesh, this must be stressful- Disheartening, too. Knowing that everything you’re doing to defend yourself and your people will ultimately amount to nothing, and not being able to do anything without the risk of causing who knows what sort of disaster... I’d feel terrible in their shoes, so kudos to these kids for keeping a relatively level head.

Snatchers... Damnit, I forgot about them. Poor Maggie... Hopefully Jimmy is alright.

Well, things are about to go to shit, aren’t they? Death Eaters are coming, and even with reinforcements, that’s. Not exactly good, given most of these fighters are children.

DID SIMON JUST KILL SOMEONE. UM. THATS GONNA BE TRAUMATIC.

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Jimmy! He seems relatively alright, thankfully- Doubt anyone would react well to him dying, given how important he is to some of the more integral members of their group. They’re all important, don’t get me wrong, but still.

CALVIN TO THE RESCUE WITH ANOTHER KILL. THESE KIDS. WILL BE TRAUMATIZED.

I’d be happy to see him too, in that position... asdfghjkl bABIES HELL YES. KISS YOUR (NEW?) BOYFRIEND. IM SO PROUD. YESSSSSS. And Calvin has a point. Stop getting beat up, Jimmy.

These poor kids are killing a lot... Please get them a therapist. Please.

Good luck writing!
~ AnonChan1

Ah! The ship has sailed!
Really well done chapter, and I applaud you for keeping up with the actual book so it's fun to see it in the OCs' perspectives.

It's been a fun ride, and I'm excited to see what you have planned for these last few chapters!

Everything is escalating so quickly, and honestly I really like that! The battle is going...well, exactly like how we expected, of course. I've said this before, but I honestly feel so sorry for our time traveling crew. They got thrown into a war that they were never meant to be in.

God when Maggie was crying I wanted to cry myself. I know how the battle itself is going to happen but it's still so sad to hear everything that's going on.

Yay, the Slytherin crew are here! The way they sneaked out was pretty smart on their move.

I screamed when Jimmy and Calvin kissed. I had been waiting for it. But I swear, if either one of them dies in this battle I might as well just tear my hair out.

Damn, Fred's death always hits hard.

I'm so glad the team is still together for now. Said this too many times, but let's hope they all stay alive. I'll die inside if one of them does.

I really wish this story wouldn't end so soon - it's been such an amazing time, and this is the best SYOC I've ever read. It's great in quality, plot, and consistent updates. A lot of SYOCs never make it past the first five chapters, but this whole fic has been such a wild ride for me that I'm going to be really sad when I don't see the email notification for a new update on this story pop up anymore.

In any case, I'll see you in the next chapter!

I don’t want this to end!

This was nice to read :)

Of course it's going to be hard for everyone, from the future or not. But I must say, I get Jimmy's urge to go and meet Harry Potter, but since there's bigger things at large, that'll have to wait. I'm a little sad for all of them, having to fight a war that isn't theirs with the burden of not being able to rescue anyone that they know is going to die.

Goddamn, now the entire Slytherin House is escorted away from the battle. Our Slytherin group doesn't have a way yet to join their friends, sadly.

It's gonna happen, and I'm so excited! Good luck writing!

Hello hello!

I mean, to be fair, I’d be surprised at seeing them, too- Pretty sure those three would be something like celebrities in the future, after all, if they somehow aren’t actually celebrities. Which I think you confirmed? Maybe? I don’t know, my memory is terrible.

The idea of a battle breaking out is definitely unsettling. Kinda nervous myself, even if I’m not actually involved. I’m just. A reader. Yeesh. You’re good at this, you know?

Call it a hunch, but I don’t think they’d buy one of them just. Suddenly being a seer.

Everything is about to go down, it seems. Hopefully this all goes well... It’d suck if they accidentally created a paradox or something, even if they saved a life in the process.

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Waiting isn’t too terrible an idea- At the very least, you’ll (Hopefully) be more ready for what’s gonna happen. Geez, I hope they all make it through this... They’re hardly bad people, after all.

Someone who wants to protect you, even if it is way too late to call an assembly.

You know, o really hope that the people who have dead loved ones in this time don’t find out about this- Or, if they do, that they don’t hate these kids for their decisions. They’re trying their best, they have no idea what the consequences would be... The thought of blaming them leaves a bad taste in my mouth.

Kanon is right- They can’t play god, because the risks that stem from that are undeniable. They’ve already done enough, anyways- Hell, one of them was basically tortured for defending someone.

No one is happy with this, I think, regardless of their original time. Poor kids.

Goddamnit Pansy, you’ve ruined this for everyone! Now the Slytherins from the future can’t help out their team when the fighting comes. Great.

Here we go... Please live, guys.

Good luck writing!
~ AnonChan1

very thrilling