| Reviews for Pool Day |
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warprince2000 chapter 1 . 3/25/2019 Awesome story! can't wait to see what happens in the next story (update soon Plz) |
PenguinArrow chapter 1 . 10/3/2018 Totally love it We need part 2 with linc and Lucy. Also god that lori luan and lynn scene. So exciting. I really love a good lincori |
jasongd chapter 1 . 8/30/2018 And another great oneshot congrats |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2018 I really loved the lorixlinc scenes. Nice one aberrantscript. |
RwOFogu chapter 1 . 8/19/2018 part two coming soon? |
LoveLoud chapter 1 . 8/16/2018 For one, this is about amazing story, as are all your others. I always look forward to your next piece. Also, would you ever consider doing a Lynn Sr x Lola? I can PM you my all around thoughts for the plot if you're interested. |
P3 chapter 1 . 8/10/2018 Wow really great stuff I hope you do more |
JRC1700 chapter 1 . 8/7/2018 A very nice story, very enjoyable. It was nice to see most of the family enjoy themselves :) I don't suppose I could talk you into writing the sequel with Lincoln and Lucy, could I? |
dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 8/7/2018 Amazing work. |
MrPeepers chapter 1 . 8/6/2018 Son of a gun Abby... I've read some hot stuff in my day, but honestly, after reading this well more than once now... You outdid yourself, which is no small feat anyway. Seriously, mad props, bud. |
nuuo chapter 1 . 8/5/2018 Shit as always Abberant. 4/10, no Lisa. Jokes aside, a real 10/10 here, was almost expecting and wishing Rita was in Lori's place. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/5/2018 Yeah, I kinda feel like you’re forgetting someone. Starts with an L and ends with a isa. |
The PhantomHokage chapter 1 . 8/5/2018 Interesting story I liked it |
Jeff chapter 1 . 8/5/2018 And yet another amazing lewd story from you today, Abby! I'd recommend slowing down though, I doubt I can keep up at this point! |
King69 chapter 1 . 8/5/2018 Lincoln fuck and cover Lori with his vim. Great lemon |