Reviews for Pool Day
warprince2000 chapter 1 . 3/25/2019
Awesome story! can't wait to see what happens in the next story (update soon Plz)
PenguinArrow chapter 1 . 10/3/2018
Totally love it
We need part 2 with linc and Lucy.
Also god that lori luan and lynn scene. So exciting. I really love a good lincori
jasongd chapter 1 . 8/30/2018
And another great oneshot congrats
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2018
I really loved the lorixlinc scenes. Nice one aberrantscript.
RwOFogu chapter 1 . 8/19/2018
part two coming soon?
LoveLoud chapter 1 . 8/16/2018
For one, this is about amazing story, as are all your others. I always look forward to your next piece. Also, would you ever consider doing a Lynn Sr x Lola? I can PM you my all around thoughts for the plot if you're interested.
P3 chapter 1 . 8/10/2018
Wow really great stuff I hope you do more
JRC1700 chapter 1 . 8/7/2018
A very nice story, very enjoyable. It was nice to see most of the family enjoy themselves :)

I don't suppose I could talk you into writing the sequel with Lincoln and Lucy, could I?
dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 8/7/2018
Amazing work.
MrPeepers chapter 1 . 8/6/2018
Son of a gun Abby... I've read some hot stuff in my day, but honestly, after reading this well more than once now...

You outdid yourself, which is no small feat anyway. Seriously, mad props, bud.
nuuo chapter 1 . 8/5/2018
Shit as always Abberant. 4/10, no Lisa. Jokes aside, a real 10/10 here, was almost expecting and wishing Rita was in Lori's place.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/5/2018
Yeah, I kinda feel like you’re forgetting someone. Starts with an L and ends with a isa.
The PhantomHokage chapter 1 . 8/5/2018
Interesting story I liked it
Jeff chapter 1 . 8/5/2018
And yet another amazing lewd story from you today, Abby! I'd recommend slowing down though, I doubt I can keep up at this point!
King69 chapter 1 . 8/5/2018
Lincoln fuck and cover Lori with his vim. Great lemon
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