Bruno being Ash's dad is a genuine first for me. Never seen that angle on it. In any case I like where this story is going; it offers a really intriguing twist on the "Pikachu abandons Ash" play, and Giovanni being involved in things so soon just leaves me more curious. Can't wait for more!

I almost threw a fit there, I saw that there is no next chapter and I was on the verge of throwing my tablet, then I check and it says it was last updated in april, so your off the hook. But as a question, so Giovanni is playing both sides, correct? Can't wait to read this one again!

The suprise dad reveal was great.

Eveelution team!? That’d be interesting

Huh? Giovanni actually cares about people? Granted I agree with the rest of what you said in the A/n but I never would have thought him capable of empathy and caring.

And Giovanni is supposed to keep Ash safe? Alone in the woods? Welp, he isn’t making it to his first gym without being either killed, kidnapped, or somehow cowed...

I love this story. can't wait for the next chapter.

It would be nice for Ash to get over his phobia of electric type Pokemon so that he and Jolteon may better get along.

*sighs* I know that Ash's remaining seven Pokemon are a secret, however I don't believe that it would hurt if we guessed what they may be. Right?

*takes a deep breath* Okay... here are my guesses:

Riolu, Zorua, Shinx, Fletchling, Pichu, Tyrogue, Bulbasaur, Rowlet, Squirtle, Charmander, Alolan Sandshrew, Alolan Meowth, Galar Meowth, Ditto.

Update please?

interesting. I like it so far. it does feel like you are throwing pokemon at him tho

Can I suggest a leagandary for ash its Rayquaza btw

Finally a story with Bruno as Ash’s dad. Please write more.

Update ASAP!

Magnificent as usual 10/10

Let's c how u use Corvaknight's ability Pressure during her battles when she gets to that stage & how ur going to explain how it works out. Nice w making Bruno his dad it's only the second time I have seen it down w Kairomaru being the first so this should be good