Haha followed and fav'd hope you keep updating this more frequently than before.

Interesting story
Love it so far
Waiting for the next part eagerly
Please update soon

Awesome can't wait for more :)

Interesting start thus far!

Personally, I would love for Cynthia to be his main pairing. Although if you were to pick lesser known females, I would suggest Elesa or Korrina!

Bro Arceus saved Ash from getting crippled.
So when is Ash gonna capture a new poke? Since his current team will get destroyed by Brock no matter the training he is doing right now.
I still suggest for Leaf to be Ash companion for this story.

Some of the parents in the pokeworld has quite the foul month if their 10 year old kids already can yell "fucking psychopath!" To others.
So Gary is stuck with Screeching Misty well they are perfect for each other, but why is Gary not traveling around in his car with his cheerleader squad?

I gonna suggest for Leaf to be Ash travelling partner she is a nice and supportive girl, which is what Ash needs right now, both of them can train, travel snd protect each other while they keep improving and travelling.

So Misty is a crazy banshee in this fix as well? Dang fans really hate her and Gary yet not Ash for his sheer stupidity and idiocy.
Tho good take I like stories when Ash take things more serious and work his butt off to progress in life and as a trainer.

Man, Misty is nuts when it comes to her bike and bug types back in the beginning. In fact, a lot of things in the first series of the show was crazy. I think Sabrina would be a good choice as a travel companion. It'd help her open up more via Ash being himself and his tendancy of encountering all kinds of Pokemon would lead to some interesting moments.

Lol this is awesome I loved the chapter and I can't wait for whatever happens next:) stay safe

hm i dont know i like both sabrina and cynthia lol i mean there is also unused like lorelei, karen, valerie, and others lol

Are you taking suggestions for Pokemon for Ash to capture?

Only gripe I have is how long it takes you to ever update!
Why does it take almost 2 years to get 3 chapters out!?
Please! You're an amazing author! I truly do enjoy your work...its just annoying how I have to reread this, and others, due to how long you take to write...please dont take this as a flame!
Though, I do hope your published book is doing well!

Ok, I love the direction you keep taking in this story. Ash constantly escaping the wrath of the hyper-bitch (Misty to those weird fans) without even knowing is just priceless. Plus seeing King Douche himself have to deal with some of the fallout is just glorious. As for the pairing, I have always been a fan of some of the less common choices Claire or Hilda are my preferences honestly. Both are criminally underused, and both can bring their own interesting perspective to Ash, especially if you either use the mentor Claire or de-aged Claire. Hope to see more soon, keep up the good work.

Omake: A mauve haired tween who was watching the screeching carrot top from his perch in a near by tree with his Riolu anime sighs and mutters under his breath "Because you're a witch with a capital "B", and you really don't deserve to be a master of _any_ type of Pokemon with that attitude of yours?"
The lad's Riolu nods sagely along with his pal as he says this.

Luckily he wasn't heard over the "bug hater's" continued screeching through the forest. for if he was heard? "Eheheh.. If I _was_ heard by Misty Waterflower, I'd bolt as fast as possible with Riolu either in his Pokeball, or hanging on to me for dear life!"

If Spearow know Steel Wing, then could focus that Steel Type energy somewhere else? Its feet for Metal Claw? Or its beak for a new move?