I liked it. It was getting good can't wait for more. _

i love it so much. but when do you want to continue took long time 6 years . PLEASE UPDATE SOON

it seems that this story is a dead project and you dont want continue this. i hope you reconsider and continue this.

um a disappointing ending to a very good fic

I'm assuming there will never be more since it was written like five years ago.

yeah good plot device until you realize how much people don't want to accept it. That's why it fails. Everyone knows that Kakashi was the youngest graduate ever. Making Gai graduate at the same time as him is glaring inaccurate and distracting.

but w/e

the story is still charming regardless of this pointless? chapter.

charming chapter

I like the talent you thought up for Iruka.

It suits him.

lol

oh

good lord

This is a really good story! Why has it been left for 4 years? What was with the weird vision/dream Iruka had after he passed out at the resteraunt? WHy is his ability suddenly getting stronger? Usage makes it stronger? Please update!

I like your story. You've got a unique plot, and that adds to the story. There's a few spelling mistakes here and there, but overall your story is really good. Even though it's been a long while, I hope you update.

Wonderful story! I think it's well written, your characterisation is great and the whole premise is really interesting. Well done and please write more.

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CDW

Forgive me if this review appears long and seems to ramble at some places. I'm reviewing as I read.

I'm So loving how you're portraying Iruka here so far! How despite his love for Naruto, there's still a lingering hate in him. That he's not a neat-freak. He was more of a prankster than Naruto because of his parents! I love his attitude, not so perfect and wonderfully human!

Iruka's explination of being a teacher definitely surprised me. "To teach others to be expendable." Definitely not your sterotypical Iruka behavior, but that's what makes me love it moreso. Your explination of what Chakara was and what exactly is the bushin and how's it's created was ingenious! Heck, I found myself trying to attempt it! XD

In chapter 10, I don't think he was "weak" but more like "helpless" and sometimes strength has nothing to do with that.

I loved this story before, but now I'm enamored by the revisions you've done with it! Wonderful Wonderful job! I do hope you plan to continue! Keep up the most awesome work!

NO UPDATE IN TWO YEARS! you're killing me on the inside! INSIDE! lol i can understand...but really... i love this story... ack more! *begs*

DQ~~

Please update son PLEASE? ;_;

Bravo! I'm really enjoying the story. And Iruka is my favorite character. Please keep going-I'm liking where your plot is going.