It seems to me like you think every relationship involves physical abuse.

that ending hit me like a truck.

who all else is still alive we don't even know!

no resolution? lol

just sadness

freaking love this.

its been in my downloaded since you wrote the first chapter but I got distracted... (my library is hugely filly primarily with Naruto Fanfiction... lol but seriously this is great)

your ability to build a backstory with irony and everything else. love it!

Whens the new fics coming :((

Its been more than a few hrs lel for the new fics :(

You are by far the worst writer in the RWBY fandom. What is this? This is 100k words worth of garbage. Not a single thing in this fic is coherent enough to reward a discussion. Even the king James Bible is worth reading 3 hours for, and I'm not even religious. But this, this is a pile of trash , using up data in the internet. We can't even blame it on immaturity since you've made a hell of lot of fics with no improvement on the writing whatsoever.

good.

You have helped make jaune and emerald my favorite pairing also I’m really sad about penny and Ciel yo have to suffer such a terrible fate but I do like how selfless Penny is not adding on to the sadness jaune has to deal with by not telling him he did not just loose his love but his child too.

Hm.
Yeah, gotta say: Absolutely not a fan of the ending. Great fic, bad ending. Generally when I read a fic with the genre's of Romance and Angst, I expect a fic which explores some dark themes but overall ends up ending fairly well with the protagonist settling down with the 'main' love (if there is one).
I DON'T expect, nor want to read, a story that ends in a way so nearly nobody is happy, and leaves the reader feeling like absolute shit.
Not gonna ask you to change the ending, but I definitely won't be coming back to read this again like I do with most fics I enjoy.
Definitely not going in my favourites, either.

Can't say I liked the ending but over all it was a great story.

What!? I was not expecting that.

Surely it isn't finished? I mean there's still so much to wrap up? What about Pyrrha? What about all the other girls, and the mothers?

Awesome

Please continiou the story awosome dont kill the main charapters the mothers sisiters or fathers make jaune use like arow weapon without the shotgun please it will be awosome

Continiou but dont let pyrrhadie or the others make jauna have a new weapon