Reviews for My Hero Assassination
uwu chapter 29 . 6/5
I’m assuming ur going to make Shoto and Yukari confront each other or something over Fuyumi? - insert me lack of words to explain me thoughts process -
Battlesny chapter 26 . 4/9
concerning your review response to Amerdism. that Esper ability you mentioned that manipulate light waves. you stated in the prologue chapter author's note that Yukari was based on the person who has that ability's sister. and she supposedly has a very similar ability, though it is completely untrained to the level that it is considered she doesn't actually have an ability.
Battlesny chapter 22 . 4/9
you didn't foreshadow her having a quirk. you ought stated it with her refusal to consider herself as anything but quirkless even though All For One have her one.
ChiDead chapter 29 . 4/7
Really enjoyed it, can’t wai for more
metacllica chapter 29 . 4/6
Bakugo's relationship with his mother sure is a complex one. He definitely takes a lot from her in more than just the looks department. He acts a lot like her in his explosive personality, but unlike him she can reign herself in a lot easier.

It also appears I was right in a sense of she wouldn't really listen to him in regards to Yukari. If she did then she would conduct her own investigation, but alas she like everyone else and sees a victim and not what's underneath. Despite Bakugo's aggressive nature, as his mother she should know he would never just randomly attack someone.

Mitsuki has failed him, but she's failed him in a more personal way then she realizes.



Onto the omake. You did a fantastic job with Yukari and Spinner. From what I've seen in the anime he hasn't done much, but here, you gave him a moment worth talking about. He asks Yukari why she fights for the League. At first she tries to give the professional assassin like answer, but he sees right through it. There has to be more to her reasoning then something to basic.

He explains why he fights for the League and then Yukari brings up the question of All-Might. Long story short he's the only real hero left and at this point in a sense he is. As a hero he embodies what it means to truly be great, but Yukari can only see him as the man who shattered her dreams. She hates him. Yukari finally lost control and shouted her true thoughts to Spinner and in a way he can understand her.

It's no secret what the quirkless go through on a daily basis and it explains her resentment for hero society and why she fights for Shigaraki. Then Spinner explains he has nothing to love like Toga, nothing to prove like Yukari, no big ambitions like his boss, but once he saw Stain's video a fire was lit in his heart. He wants to see a true hero society like Stain imagined. He's nobody that's fighting for a goal that wasn't originally his... but that's okay.

Yukari can't understand that and refuses to accept that as ay kind of explanation. She can't bring herself to believe in dreams anymore and yet... she still has dreams. At least that's what I believe.

Good work as always.
Pannenkoekenrage chapter 29 . 4/6
As awesome as this story is and the concept of Yukari as a villain, I still can't help but hope she finds some happiness in the end, with no real goal right now that she at one point encounters a line she isn't willing to cross like not wanting to shoot Kota early on in the story. I want redemption for my girl! ;-;
Harleking31 chapter 29 . 4/6
Weeeeee!

Katsuki’s mom is good!

Was this the fic that had hinted at her being the one guilty of Bakugo’s... character traits? I don’t even know anymore.
Juliandog5 chapter 28 . 3/14
I really like this story. I'm following! Keep up the good work!
Juliandog5 chapter 14 . 3/12
I love this story so far, it's kinda great.
leblos1 chapter 19 . 3/11
Nice tve Heros are as srupid as always! Uraraka really annoyed me I hope she gets another mindset! All Might really failed the succesor search...
And Bakugo still trying to deny that Yukari the serial killer exist because of him.
Juliandog5 chapter 1 . 3/11
You had my curiosity, but now you have my interest.
leblos1 chapter 7 . 3/11
Why has she no close combat training? Does not make any sence if her goal is to proof herself?! Would you not try to learn everything possible against people witv quirks?
Dreadknight12 chapter 28 . 3/9
Very well, and if I we're to imagine Yukari's, and Tomura's relationship I'd have to gauge it as a mature younger sister, to the immature older brother, but any way I'm looking forward to what you have planned between Yukari, and Shoto.
metacllica chapter 28 . 3/8
This was a really nice chapter. The opening was great as it provided some nice insight into Yukari's thoughts on her boss. He might be her senior, but is still a bit of a man-child at time. Though throughout his battles with the heroes, he's grown and evolved and earned Midoriya's respect. He has all the tools to be good leader for their little organization and for that she chooses to follow him above anyone else.

Back to the present time, this operation went off without a hitch. The most interesting part was Yukari's thoughts on the witness she let live. Her thoughts on the look of defiance in his eyes really caught my attention. As a villain, Yukari is the hunter and her victims the prey. Prey isn't supposed to be defiant. Yes the man is scared, but he isn't broken. Now in the future she wants to work on curbing that feeling. It'll be interesting to see where she goes from here.

Lastly the hostage is Tsukauchi's sister. There's no question the good detective will come looking for her, but I don't know what they have in mind for him. I might have to re-read the previous chapter. Anyway, great work as usual... You haven't lost a step.

P.S: Will we see any more of what's going on with Bakugou soon? I really want to know what's running through his head since the fight.
Definitely Not Redd chapter 28 . 3/7
Super glad this story is continuing, and another great chapter on top of it! It’s getting very interesting now, and I’ve waited longer for worse. Good luck, dear author.
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