Reviews for Confessions of The Firstborn (original version)
Toermalijn chapter 13 . 12/13/2016
Beautifully sad story.
heredia chapter 10 . 10/27/2014
she really was a fool to agreed to spread her legs, that he is from her house doesnt mean he wouldnt behave like cattle, i had many similar cases with people who seemed clever but then turned out as cattle who thought about sex too much - so i know
heredia chapter 8 . 10/27/2014
no, i still dont get the way she died
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
almost 10 yrs since you wrote this, made me cry alot. X great work.
Love from hk!
lolamish8896 chapter 13 . 4/7/2014
hey there i jst found your story n normally i dnt go for stories that involve tradegies bt i gave it a try. n nw im in tears.i mean literally in typing this n im crying...lucius malfoy is one of my fav characters n i always like stories in which he turns good inthe end...nwys i try reading the newer version nw n i hve jst small request that plz dnt kill in new version n also if possible make lucius realize his mistake n give d story n happy ending...
overall it goes widout sayn dt i luved this storyy.

p. n lucia pairing wud also b lovely
Guest chapter 13 . 1/19/2014
oh my god i just read the whole thing and that was amazing! i actually have tears in my eyes
cant wait to read the new version xx
EndlessReign chapter 13 . 7/7/2013
Hey I just came across this story and I don't know if you'll read this review, but this was amazing! This is really sad and I wish she could have ended up with Bill living a happy life. Wow I noticed you said that the Order of the Phoenix book was coming out in two days... that was sooo long ago!
crazy1person2you3been4warned chapter 13 . 11/5/2012
That's so sad! I'm entirely moved and I feel like Lucy (HEr dad) is a total bastard and should rot in hell! It is a very good story a little dark but very good. Keep writing!
peanutbutterjamjellyyy chapter 13 . 11/5/2012
Beautiful story!
Hannah chapter 12 . 3/7/2012
Oh come on! She couldn't just have gone undercover and Fleur and they could've lived happy and whatnot?
rainbow-khan chapter 13 . 1/21/2012
I cried..amazing truly amazing
angelvan105 chapter 13 . 11/6/2011
Wow such tragic and pure darkness experience to poor Lucia.. I truly felt connection for this story! Good job!
Dreamsb223 chapter 13 . 10/29/2011
This is a really great story! I enjoyed it a lot!
ScarletReid chapter 13 . 3/21/2011
This story made me cry which I'd bad because I have school, it's weird reading this story in 2010 when it was made in 2003-04, it would be cool if you still read this reviews and it would be even cooler if you made a story with Bill and Lucia
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