Seems kinda stupid following through with the bases if Adam knows what there doing and where there going. Obviously nothing of any importance if gonna be there.

This literally makes no sense. She straight up kills them when they can't answer her where Adam is and the one who knows she just straight up lets go. How is that logical in any sense of the word?

Basically, Ruby's whole personality just changed here. She is not consistent and that is bad writing.

Well, its a start Yang. Though i imagine after years of alcohol abuse and no training you are very out of shape, like not even conditioned to the point she was when she started Beacon. It gonna take a long time for her to get back to where she as when she started Beacon. Not even mentioning her skills would have taken a large dive.

Hell, the same for Weiss to a lesser degree. Weiss is nowhere near as bad as Yang but i doubt sitting in offices and such all day with minimal training/exercise has left her anywhere near where she was at when at Beacon either.

Meanwhile Ruby would have only gotten better, i mean Ruby is likely one of the most deadly Hunters around now.

I have to be honest, I had to skim the whole thing to remember what this was about :p

I didnt think anyone would ever make a yang more uesless as a character as canon yang but an alcoholic yang sure does it.

good stuff. thanks for writing and updating.

Good chapter.

I just binge read the fuck outa this. IT IS SO GOOOOD. Please keep up the great work and if you ever need a proofreader, shot me a PM. I already have a story im an editor for and I've been told that I'm great to bounce ideas off of.

Im not an author myself but please believe me when I say this. Don’t ever try to get every little thing perfect. It will never work. The chapter was well done. Mabey, if you really want to find something wrong with it, you could say that Ruby turned around a little fast but I think if you keep her a little distant and distrustful it will be fine.

Good chapter. I look forward to the next one.

Good chapter

Good chapter. Weiss' semblance has always been my favourite.

Good chapter.

Good start.

nice