Reviews for Our Protector
LordGiacomoS chapter 17 . 13h
Not to be that guy, even though I totally am, but what is the status of the update that was said to be happening before the end of July?o
Bridget98 chapter 17 . 8/1
I love this chapter. Just amazing.
Clear Skydancer chapter 6 . 7/31
Something this chapter never really made clear to me was *why* Percy felt the need to go with Stark into the wormhole. It was very obvious that he *was* and about how Natasha felt it was a bad idea, but I for the life of me can't fathom his reasoning for doing so.
Guest chapter 17 . 7/30
Hey man, all ur Books are awesome and I have a bit of a feeling that they are tooo underrated despite being not imaginable good.
Bye and stuff and I hope I will read sth from the one seven or this book again.
Guest chapter 11 . 7/30
Err I think u forgot that they say it the other way around
Yess chapter 6 . 7/30
Yaaaaaaaassss I ship them!
But c’mon please let them see each other again!
Nova Train chapter 2 . 7/29
This is a great story! I was just wondering how Percy can lift so much?
KingRocma160 chapter 17 . 7/28
When are you planning on updating ?
Guest chapter 17 . 7/17
I love this story. Aside from a few things it is great.
One of the things that I find lacking is even after 17 chapters, Percy's superhero persona is severely underdeveloped. Every A-list superhero has certain things that uniquely identify him.
Name: Well he already has a superhero name, 'The Sentinel'. Not the best name in my opinion but not the worst. It's just that whenever you mention it, I am reminded of The Sentinels, the robot adversaries of X-Men.
Suit/Costume: Easiest way to recognise a superhero is his suit. The American flag theme of Captain America's suit for instance. Thor's armour and helm(in comics and animated series) reflect his Asgardian origins. Not to mention the suit generally acts as a form of armour. Suits are often designed to enhance the wearer's abilities. Take Iron Man for example his suits are not only the representation of his genius intellect but also form an impressive armour. The red and gold makes him easily recognisable.
Symbol: This may at times be the most important thing. Symbols can represent a hero's origins, his ideology etc. At times the symbol can used to strike fear in hearts of his/her enemies. Take the bat symbol for instance, it's use in 'The Dark Knight Rises' when it is lit on the bridge.
Weapon: A hero's weapon most times indicates the power and strength of a hero. Mjolnir and Stormbreaker for example not only show the measure of Thor's power but also act as symbols. His character feels incomplete without his weapon. Batman's batarangs serve as both symbols and weapons.
Signature move: Most heroes have a signature move. These moves also act as symbols or at times are their greatest weapon.
Sidekick: Generally, only A-list heroes have sidekicks. Who would want to be a sidekick of a B-grade hero? Sidekick(s) can represent power, influence, popularity of a hero.
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I mentioned all these things because in your story Percy doesn't really have any such thing. It often looks like he has to make-do with whatever is available like someone lacking resources, something which is farther from the truth. He had almost unlimited resources in his SHIELD days. The gods gave him a most important task of protecting the Space Stone but provided him no support.
Another inconsistency is in his fights. While he takes out the grunts very easily, the boss fights are a different matter. For someone who fought Gods and Titans in his teen years, he seems to be struggling against mortals. Enhanced mortals, but mortals nonetheless. Till now he has not shown any reason as to why SHIELD was scared to let him run around freely. Especially considering Fury had Captain Marvel standing by in New York. Not to mention many mutants that were running around without affiliation to SHIELD.
JoMAmmA chapter 17 . 7/16
Can't wait till the arc your going to post on here!
I know that it would be a while but I would love to see Infinity war,.Endgame and Agents of SHIELD in the plot!
German Bear chapter 17 . 7/16
I could see the jury, the agents, and the judge who put Percy away facing consequences and begging him to help them.
Lil Al1en chapter 1 . 7/13
Very well done but please could you update more regualarly like The Last Argronaut, Also please incorporate Agents of Shield if your doing the whole marvel universe, as I would like to see how Coulson thinks of him and the anxiety between the pair.
RandomRead3r chapter 17 . 7/12
Agents of SHIELD Crossover Please!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12
I would love to see you incorporate Agents of SHIELD into the story to give it some extra flare as I have just binge watched the whole 7 seasons and thoroughly addicted, but nevertheless carry on and keep up the good work!
Calen chapter 17 . 7/9
Fury and Couldon need some payback.
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