This is Awesome! I really enjoyed this one(two)-shot.

Found it nice, but need to agree with Luciendar.

That was an odd way to end the story. It sounded more like the beginning of one. I just don't see the point if giving Naruto the Rinnegan.

I have a minor correction for the first chapter. At one point you have Tayuya thinking about being imprisoned in Konoha for 6 months before Naruto showed up. You also note that she helped take Sasuke and mention where she first met Naruto. Problem is, when Naruto was first sent to her cell, he still had that wound from Sasuke. That means he must've gone to jail almost immediately after returning. So there's no way she spent six months in there alone.

A well done story. This was quite interesting to read with Naruto being in prison with Tayuya as well as how they interacted with one another. Nicely done with the changes in their feelings for one another as they didn’t like one another much until it became something more. The development was a nice pace and described quite well. It was endearing to read how Naruto was able to calm her from the cursed mark and just making sure she was feeling alright. The second chapter to this was quite something as it glimpsed into the future a bit. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

Now this is what we call good writing! Amazing story mate! I hope you will one day make a full story with this instead of a 2 shot

I agree with some of the others, you should write a more detailed and lengthier version of this. Good story!

Could you maybe write a uh entire fic, because this being a oneshot only is a crime against the world

Please continue
Awesome chapter

Thar made me smile. Nicely done.

As an expansion of my previous review, I love your stuff whenever you keep it simple. My main problem with "The Family" is that you kind of went crazy with the OC and the made up OP Kekkei Genkai. It kind of takes away from the story and its tension.
So the relatively simple and familiar setting of this story really lets the pairing itself shine.

Damn now you have me smiling like a fool. This chapter was a roller coaster. I humbly request, nay, I DEMAND that you do this wonderful pairing justice an write a full stories. There is a reason why Tayuya is a lowkey fan favourite on this website and you hit the nail on it. I love your stuff honestly.

Yup it was cute and I can’t wait for it to continue

Amazing!

I could just imagine Naruto saying "Shira Tensei" in the darkest voice possible for him

I do love this fluffy epilogue.

Good job!