For me this was altogether... Disappointing. it started out nicely but quickly become overwhelmed with itself (too fast paced). I felt ideas came and went and were left forgotten at in the last few chapters you just wanted to finish writing rather than tell a good story. Look forward to future stories, don't let anything discourage you from writing

Why did you do toga dirty like that like you could have had naruto help her by taking her to a psychologist or something.

Aye bro you should have Naruto not only turn into a giant fox but also have him have access to the power in his human form like his nine tails cloak he made when fighting sasuke for the first time at the final valley.

Is this a harem and if it is put every character involved in the like Naruto, Izuku, Toga, Mina and Class 1-A & B.

To fast paced

Damn it.. I was hoping Toga would be killed! Fucking crazy bitch deserves to die.

I love the story but the ending feels a bit deus ex machina. It was fun all around tho

Cool how Naruto uses SMASH in his attacks just like All Might and Deku. I wonder if we might see a double or triple SMASH from the trio. Sorry, I guess Sonic Forces and the idea of combining attacks was just to cool of a idea to mention.

This animals having Quirks thing is cool! Mainly cause it reminds of One Piece. You know the sword eating elephant devil fruit or the bazooka eating the dog fruit.

Welp, the fights that you wrote are great as usual.

Stupid mina lol all she cares about is getting her itch scratch

As much as I loved your stories, I really don't like how you portrayed Mina here, like some girl who needs to scratch their itch and waiting for naruto to scratch it.

What a troublesome woman.

Mina in this story is weird. She had it rough on Naruto. I'd love to pair him with momo because why not haha she seems hot in the canon. Can't wait to read more chap.

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