| Reviews for Harry Potter - The Fantasy Gamer |
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sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 1 . 8/7 Bad start. |
KingOfEternity chapter 4 . 7/15 interesting |
KingOfEternity chapter 3 . 7/15 shouldn't he be able to learn Ankhseram black magic? |
jjay221 chapter 4 . 6/26 I need this story updated, like yesterday. |
RWBY SHIPING TRASH chapter 2 . 4/20 I'd like to point out when writing emrys assets it had over 1 trillion galileans and you put harry's money at below 10 billion |
lonetigar20 chapter 4 . 10/12/2019 Awesome can't wait for more :) |
Pushi19 chapter 4 . 10/8/2019 Update it soon please I can’t wait for the next chapter |
Mr.Heller chapter 2 . 10/7/2019 This is extremely boring, and poorly written, with more stats information than plot. |
SkylerHollow chapter 4 . 10/7/2019 So far pretty good, normally not a fan of super OP stories but you have done this one really well so far. Curious on how you plan to keep the stakes high for conflict if you plant to go that route. Or if you will be going the One Punch Man route... Either way looking forward to more of this, the long chapters are greatly appreciated. |
Mischief Managed-Up To No Good chapter 4 . 10/7/2019 This seems interesting. It really does. I enjoy reading it. However it is very confusing sometimes. I was really hoping to see more of the. Avengers movie in here, but there really isn't any. Anyways, great idea, love the plotline. |
CCSakuraforever chapter 4 . 10/7/2019 Esta muy bueno el capitulo mas como le va a harry en los calabozos y los estudios que paso que ahora esta graduado que pasa con su hermano y que descubrio de su sangre asgardiana mas que pasara en gringotts |
The reaper of death445 chapter 4 . 10/7/2019 Please update again soon. |
Lednacek chapter 2 . 2/2/2019 The op is too much for me |
Abriv chapter 3 . 12/29/2018 Can't wait to read more really enjoyed reading your perspective |
The Willow Grave chapter 3 . 11/23/2018 Your character is a bit of a gary sue. You main plot is greatly lacking. The stat/skill dump is not nessary and just causes people to skip over it. I joy well put together crossovers however you tried to smoosh to much together. Adding The Gamer to Harry Potter in the marvel universe is already a very complicated process; are the avengers and SHIELD aware of the abyss and wouldnt they try to deal with it, is tht where hawkeye finds Natasha? The add in with The Irregular at Magic Highschool it doesnt work. You now have 4 different ways of doing magic(ignoring the skill dump from Naruto) and the technology from IMH is commkn for everyone to use, how is stark technology "good" is comparsion when he isnt using the CAD system or a varient of it and still is a top weapons dealer. So i think you need to plan out a plot, give your character struggles and an end goal or life meaning to work toward. Avoid skill dumps, and try not to combine to much or it will leave your reader wondering what the heck. I could only follow what you had written because i have watched/read all the stories you have referenced. Be concise clear and don t dump stats people care about how they effect the world not base skills. Happy Writing. |