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Hello there! It's about time I knuckled down from my crazy schedules to read and review your stories, something which I have been meaning to do for a long time. And I randomly picked this one, because the summary caught my interest. As for the oneshot itself, wow. Just. Wow.

You've incorporated a very neat concept. I LOVED the Space-time object displacement device in the show, and the fact that Red and Purple thought it was a good idea too! And honestly, yeah I'd say so! And I LOVE how much it blew up in their faces at every turn, and how cleverly you knew of the consequences of having Zim out of the picture, what happened to the older Tallest, and how, in general, he's actually been strengthening the Empire. Zim is a loose cannon, and he is like a luck-destruction god that can both hurt and benefit his race. I got that from the show, and I love that you incorporated this into a story!

Thank you for writing this! I enjoyed it!

did they honestly think they'd have better luck with one of ZIM's plans then he did?...oh of course they did they're red and purple. this was too good, I love how it keeps escalating before they finally say "screw it", and I think the ending fine. excellent job.

... That's ONE way to learn a lession about time travel. x''''''''''''''D

Zim always wreaks havoc, one way or another

This would've actually made a good episode in the animated series.
The way it was written, I really could see this being animated and fully voiced.

This is a interesting story. I like the idea that Zim is a double headed sword that has positive effects on the irken empire no one could have guessed and I really hope you incorporate that in your The New Adventures of Invader Zim series. I can understand why your not satisfied with this story. Don't get me wrong I love this story and you use this idea well for this one shot but I feel the idea of Zim being a double headed sword that has unknown positive effects on the Irken Empire is too big for just a one shot. And I feel it too easy for it to be that without Zim the Irken Empire would be weaker in the future. This is and the way you did it work here because this is a one shot but if you do use this idea in The New Adventures of Invader Zim I hope you make it more complicated so it better fit in with the story. Again great work.

P.S. I love the adventure of the Tallest, of course they would not realize to late that Zim was the cause of there rise to power but to be fair it understandable why they would not know that dealing with Zim.

You may not be satisfied, but I am. You took elements of one of my favorite Zim episode...and made it BETTER.

Thank you.

This was a clever concept, and quite funny by the end, when we had so many Reds and Purples debating together. You also got their dynamic down well; some writers seem to go overboard making Purple the funny/stupid one, but him realizing that this whole thing was a bad idea felt like good balance. Nice work.

Awesome one shot it's always great to see a story where some of my favorite IZ character shine.

This was one very amusing story, as the Tallest learn why it's best just avoid the headache of time travel. I really laughed at the scene where two other sets of Tallest from failed timelines showed up.

I suppose it makes sense that the chaos Zim causes would make the Empire stronger and more prepared against other threats in a way.

Loved this story! Well-written Tallest fics are always a ton of fun, and this was definitely one of those. It felt like a real episode of IZ or an issue from the comics.

I loved this one and the multiple Tallest thing was hilarious.

Having so many possible futures being explored was really entertaining! And it was pretty funny to see them continuously trying out new ways to get rid of Zim only for every single one to be "Nope, actually, it gets worse" until they just give up and decide that having Zim around is, in the end, the best of their possible worlds. Quite a nice subversion of expectations here!

First of all, DUDE! I loved reading this fic! Every freaking word... So much so that I read it a second time before leaving this review, LOL.

This turned out better than I envisioned so thanks for the belated birthday fic my friend!

Truth be told, there were many things in the story that I enjoyed but since there are way to many to name here, I'll just say that the next time Red thinks its a good idea to use one of Zim's plans? He should listen to Purple.

I also want to think that after the Tallest seeing several alternative versions of themselves (love the Family Guy reference by the way) they learned their lesson but probably not seeing as they fully haven't learn to appreciate Zim's part in the Irken Empire even when things were horrible without him.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.