Reviews for Heart of the Storm
afionna262 chapter 66 . 13h
I absolutely ADORED this story. I love 10 so much, and I love how realistic the relationship you created between the Doctor and Hartly. I'm really looking forward to reading the sequel when it comes out!
IoSolUno chapter 66 . 7/18
This is by far the longest fanfic I have ever read, and the first one over 150,000 words to keep my attention the WHOLE way through. Being ADD that's rather hard. But i lived this so very much. I havent read very many DW fics, in fact I started with your HP story and loved your writing so much I had to read more.

IM SO GLAD I DID! I truly loved this story. You have done a masterful job rewriting so many episodes, but your original adventures are what really show your amazing abilities. It's been while since I watched DW and I was struggling at times to tell which were yours vs the shows, the original ones just fit in so well.

I am totally blown away with your writing abilities and will be an avid fan from now on. I look forward to reading your next story, I'm not even the biggest fan of 11 but I know I'll love him through your writing.
TheSlayerofGallifrey chapter 66 . 7/14
Wow. I just found this story and devoured it in 3 days. Your original chapters are so well done, and you've created an amazing OC. I will be rereading this right away, and I can't wait to one day read your sequel. Cheers!
Stevie Jazz chapter 66 . 7/10
I’m reading your Fred Weasley story. I clicked on your profile after you recently mentioned a doctor who sequel. One million plus words?! Of course I have to give it a go. Several days later and I’m sobbing because I just finished this masterpiece and am so ready for the next series...goodness I hope it’s soon, but I understand if it’s not!

I absolutely loved this series. Hart was not perfect but was real- and that mattered so much. The love was so realistic, not rushed or forced. Characterization? Amazing. And the original chapters? So, so smart and fitting for this world.

I loved this story and can’t wait for the next one. The only things I think I would like to see (but obviously it’s whatever you feel the story calls for) is an M rating...lol, we all love some good steamy scenes when the time calls for it. Also, will you include Hart with 12? Because I love him so much too!
TheWorldInADay chapter 66 . 7/9
Please prepare for a long review.
I discovered this story three days ago. It's been quite some time since I've watched Doctor Who. Truthfully, it was more of a guilty pleasure show I watched growing up with my older brothers. I never understood it all that well, but it was a fun show to watch, and as I grew up, my fondness for David Tennant as an actor only bloomed. This story made me completely rediscover my love for Doctor Who. The universe, the characters, the story are all wonderful things to get lost in.
This story, however, is a thousand times better than all of that. The best thing about film/tv/books is that they are capable of taking us somewhere that we will never go. Your story did that for me. It transported me to a universe so vast and large that I could barely comprehend it, but that I knew I wanted to be a part of it. Hartley is such a pure character, so completely different to the various heroines we see in stories that are strong, unbreakable, and frankly unreal. Hartley felt for others, she cried, she feared, and she loved. All the remarkable things that humans are capable of doing. It was pleasant to read a story where the main character was both independent but reliant on her friends; who was strong but could openly cry without feeling embarassed; who suffered through so much pain but who found the joy in life on the daily.
I truly loved this story. I read the entire thing in three days (it would have been much quicker, mind you, if I didn't have to work as well). It brought me back to my childhood, while also deepening it in a mature way. Every chapter you wrote was fantastic, and I'm still in awe that you were able to write original chapters as though they were episodes from the tv show themselves. I loved the interactions the characters had, the relationships they built, and OF COURSE, I loved the Doctor and Hartley.
I hope that everything is going well for you and that this message reaches you across the vast web. I hope that you continue to write, not just for my sake, but for you own. I hope that you do write about eleven because I'm curious to see how you would portray him. I hope that you enjoy writing.
Please know that I will be reading all of your other stories once I have the time. I'm sure they're all just as lovely.
Finding you so far away, xoxo, the World in a Day
anniestark chapter 28 . 7/3
i would literally die to read this whole story from the doctor's point of view! it seems so interesting, what he thinks, feels, etc. ugh, so frustrating! lol, I love it!
Saiyanprincess1511 chapter 1 . 6/26
Mid/late 2020, waiting for the sequel with baited breaths, your orignal stories are amazing and your decision of not doing the episodes if you aren't planning on changing anything is something more writers need to adopt
Anonymous chapter 66 . 6/25
I binged this in a week and loved every moment! You have amazing writing and this story has been a trip! Cant wait for the sequel
yaaastine chapter 1 . 6/19
Oh my god no fucking way. I've been reading this story for days and I just clicked on your profile and find out you are the same person who wrote my favorite the 100 story? Holy shit. I love this story btw! Not done yet, I'm at the chapter after Jenny left but I'm sure I will love the rest just as much as the other chapters I read. I absolutely adore your original adventures. You manage to keep everyone so in character and keep the plot so engaging and interesting! Hope you'll continue writing the story with Eleven (even tho he is not my favorite)... kept thinking all day abt what an interesting dynamic she would have with 12 lmao
BoredGirl27 chapter 66 . 5/14
I've read this story like five times, I love it! Their relationship is so well written, no instant love or anything rushed, the original adventures are amazing. Every time I read it again I die inside because I have to wait until we get more! Hart is great and I know I'll wait whatever we need to wait author!
Guest chapter 66 . 5/11
Hey :) ! Hope you're doing fine during this pandemic. Fell in love with Hartly, you wrote her so well that she didn't seem like just a character but a real person. Any news or updates on the sequel?
Patiently waiting,

R_A
WaywardandWanderlust chapter 66 . 5/8
THIS WAS AMAZING! I absolutely loved it.
RulerOfCats chapter 66 . 5/1
I’ve just gotten finished rereading this series with the await of the sequel I am so excited to see.

I wanted to say that I absolutely loved this series and the show never failed to put a smile on my face as you took such a long amount of material and reworked an OC so seemlessly in the mix. Hartley's journey was one that left me on a world wind of emotions that I loved. There were so many times in the beginning of her mistreatment that made my heart ache.

For the new serious, I really hope that the Eleventh Doctor and Hartley have that moment of rediscovering one another after their fight. I would love to see so much more of their relationship!

Thank you so much for writing this amazing work and I cannot wait for more!
MarvellousFaery chapter 66 . 4/27
I just binge read this entire story and my GOD this is so AMAZING
THANK YOU SO MUCH for writing this story
Lately I've been really disheartened by Doctor Who, I had so much hope for the female doctor but after the first episode... The plot just became worse and worse and there's no Doctor Who brilliance in it anymore
I lost some of my love for Doctor Who as new episodes come out and it just tarnishes the legacy and retcons so many things

And then I stumble upon your story and I just felt so HAPPY again
Like the magic the series always held for me was back
THANK YOU
I'm rewatching the show again because of this story and I'm so glad I am
I'll stop watching with the 12th Doctor because that's for me the end of Doctor Who and I just can't thank you enough for writing this story and REMINDING me of why I love the series so much

I'm looking forward to the sequel and will check out your other stories
Thank you 3
Gottalovethosefanfics chapter 66 . 4/26
I love this story! I know you said that you wouldn’t be posting for a while but I was just wondering how far you are now with Hartley’s sequel? The Eleventh Doctor is my favourite so I can’t wait! Hope you and your family are well and I hope to see you updating soon. Thank you!
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