Wow. Awesome fan fiction. Truly marvelous. I do wish it were a bit more polished. Sometimes the grammar takes a little peicing together to understand but overall phenomenal job. I can't wait until there is more.

Couple other quick things. Bea normally calls beetlejuice "junior". I liked the moment u had her use his real name, it gave it more of a serious tone, but she probably wouldn't call him bj.

I also sometimes get confused by the timeline but I think I'm just believing the time is progressing more quickly than it is. I'd feel a little more grounded if u could throw in a "what happened (insert number of months here) ago".

Sorry if the constructive crit bothers u, I just can't help myself. But really, awesome job and I really can't wait for more.

Beej's gonna have a lot of fun with them, the father especially...

Will he add Claire Brewster to his list, too...?