| Reviews for To Rise, or Fall |
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  Kairo chapter 1 . 6/30 Did... Did he just explode? |
| fitzy chapter 1 . 3/1 update plz |
 Cyborg3400 chapter 1 . 11/14/2019 Its been over a year please continue the story |
| James1996 chapter 1 . 12/24/2018 Great start, I look forward to reading more in the future. |
| Merlin Perseus Potter chapter 1 . 12/20/2018 UPDATE! |
| thomaspheasant chapter 1 . 12/13/2018 please update |
| storming hawk wolf chapter 1 . 9/13/2018 Please oh please oh please oh please, give us more |
| Merlin Perseus Potter chapter 1 . 8/23/2018 Update i need more |
| AmWRAZ chapter 1 . 8/22/2018 oh and you should put a pairing like pertemis in the summary easier to find it |
| SonOfHades1 chapter 1 . 8/4/2018 My guy why is this so good? Huurrrry with that next update |
| VVabbajacc chapter 1 . 7/30/2018 hope this comes out as a great rewrite! |
| Hagoromo Senju chapter 1 . 7/30/2018 Did it blow Percy all thebway back to the first Titan War? Pr maybe it'll be like in quantum Leap where he keeps moving to rand9m times and keeps running into Artemis. |
| Osravix chapter 1 . 7/30/2018 Hell yes good stuff |
| 0zymandias chapter 1 . 7/30/2018 I thought this was the old one which I am reading just to know a bit if whats ahead byt if Percy does become the new Kronos don't call Perseus Kronos call him Perseus Aion who was the primordial of eternity but also often confused with the primordial of time Cronus which to those who know a fair amount about Greek mythology (or just look him up on wiki) would add a littlr spice and mystery but hell I can barely count as a writer so you do your thing |
| pontus first god of the sea chapter 1 . 7/29/2018 Well... damn. I don’t know what pisses me off more, the fact that I have to wait for the next chapter or waiting to see how much better this story can be... seriously keep up the awesome work I read your old story too and I loved that one too. (P.S. don’t go the route of Percy becoming the new Kronos this time it wasn’t really gonna turn out very well unless you managed to pull it off in a ridiculously lucky way) |
