ow pain

vvv that's the true pain ain't it

It is, without a doubt, a most heart breaking moment when one realizes that when a story that is written so well, so vividly, and so emotionally touching is not updated in months and we, the devoted readers, are left to assume that it will most likely not have it’s “And they lived happily ever after”, judging by the amount of time that has passed since it’s last update and will most likely be cast aside eventually meeting it’s dire gloom as are the fate of many thousands of others well written unfinished stories to be forgotten and left to die up on a very high shelf covered in thick dust and cobwebs in their minds. This is, indeed, heartbreaking. :(

I really like what you've put together here. This story seems like it could go so many different ways! I love it!

I love your writing.

Please, continue to write this beautiful story.

This is amazing. Keep up the good work c:

wow Connor needs to take a chill pill

This chapter was amazing, it's so intense!
Btw I like that reference of the hungry hungry caterpillar :)

I hope you'll continue this, it's intriguing.

Please continue! My heart is aching to find out what happens to poor Connor c':

Wow, that starts interesting! I‘m curious how it will go on. Thank you for the first chapter!

omg please update soon. this is amazing