I know you pretend not to be Neptune20 but hey, you’re both doing D/s stories, they all are really well written and you both disappeared a little more than 1 year ago, be careful the readers will notice ;)

Joking aside I really enjoyed reading your story, it’s really well written and I live how the whole D/s was slowly brought in, with character building etc. I would really love to read more of this story if you came back, and to see where this is heading to

I've since been informed from an independent source that you are in fact rtnwriter and uploaded under a different handle for reasons. Please ignore my previous review.

That said, I love your stories and really like reading them. Take a break for however long you need.

I'm pretty sure you're copying from rtnwriter on ao3. Stop that at once

Please come back! It's been a year! Want so much more.

Please return! Need more!

Surprisingly detailed for what could have been a simple PWP; points for giving the concept some depth, if nothing else.
I have a few doubts about any librarian being open-minded enough to ‘recognise’ that Hermione had a submissive streak this early in her teens, but at least you put some effort into acknowledging the issues she and Harry face trying to explore such a dynamic as their first major relationship, even as they recognise that they each ‘need’ such an unorthodox relationship to deal with their relative issues.
Add in such twists as Daphne’s expressed interest in some kind of ‘professional relationship’ with Harry (even if I’m not immediately considering the possibility of it being a sexual one), and Harry’s recent queries about the events surrounding Sirius’s arrest creating new potential for wider twists, and I sincerely hope you haven’t abandoned this storyline.
Plus, I have to wonder what’s going to happen if/when anyone else learns about Harry and Hermione’s relationship…

I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too. Keep up your great works of art. So please can back to write more.

Thank you and Please,

Terri

I'm really enjoying this quite a lot, however, the nickname has given her immediately brought my mind to finding Nemo so I couldn't really take those last few sentences seriously. it'll take some getting used to but I imagine I'll he enjoying the rest of this more now that things are heating up, even with the name.

One of the better Harmony D/s stories that I've read

Hey, please come back, your fans need you, they look up to you...

I wonder what she wants. Love it

Hope for an update soon. Love the dynamic between harry and hermione plus I'm very curious how daphne is going to factor in. Here's hoping harry has two sex slaves in the future.;)

This is my favourite story in the world I love it so much please update I always come back to it hoping for new chapters

so... I wasn't sure if I was going to review this fic but here I am. I read it in the last 3 months or so, every time I felt in the mood. It was only recently that I realised that I was interested in this type of thing. Compared to other similar fics, this one really goes into detail about the emotions and thoughts that Harry and Hermione have while doing this. Usually it's just pure smut, but I really liked the in-depth analysis which seems quite realistic. However sometimes I can't hep but think that it's a bit much, no matter how realistic and good it is. I'm not very good at giving reviews so this is all I'll say, but I'm looking forward to the next update. hopefully you're still working on this, as the last update was a few months ago.
Thanka!

I am really enjoying it ... Hope u update soon