| Reviews for Danmachi: A fresh start |
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Jose19 chapter 2 . 5/2 The one way that a deity can receive a permanent death is for her Arcanum to be swallowed up or simply digest it this happened to Artemis. Ishtar as you know was sent up to Heaven but she is not dead at all in fact the deity is trying to get revenge on Freya. |
Jose19 chapter 1 . 5/2 I will state this a Goddess that uses her Arcanum is not dead they simply appear on Heaven but are forbidden to enter the Mortal realm again so Hestia is alive, and can still see him. |
Jose19 chapter 12 . 4/20 This chapter showed a event that diehard fans of Ais would love but expect retaliation from Freya on this matter. |
hungergamesfan123456789 chapter 12 . 4/20 please update |
FalcoSubbuteo chapter 12 . 4/2 This was a really heartwarming story, and a wonderful read :-) I can imagine Hestia all in tears in Tenkai screaming about how Bell's such a baka and should have noticed her first. |
Jared MENDOZA chapter 12 . 4/2 This was great! I'm sad that the story is don t though TWT. Thanks so much for making this! |
Jose19 chapter 6 . 11/27/2019 Loki recruiting Bell is a horrible nightmare true that she can still acquire because she has the most powerful Familia but a battle with Loki is a fight between superpowers it would decimate the entire city. |
Jose19 chapter 3 . 11/27/2019 Bell isn’t someone to laugh because he is now a level 4 bordering on the fifth level, and his skills are unique. |
Apocalyptica-sama chapter 10 . 5/11/2019 "I should give him my regards later" GoT has me thinking Finn will have Bell assassinated with that line xD |
Apocalyptica-sama chapter 8 . 5/11/2019 Someone, anyone, please...just dropkick Lefiya in the face |
Apocalyptica-sama chapter 6 . 5/11/2019 Lol, Freya waited too long. Rip |
RatherLazyWriter chapter 12 . 12/19/2018 Could've been longer but i like it anyway! |
rheter chapter 9 . 12/7/2018 So I just wanted to point out a bit of a plot hole... The line "It has been almost one month since the passing of his goddess" doesn't make sense, given that in the beginning, he was shut in and not responding, for three weeks after it happened... And now we're presumably an extra week and a half to 2 weeks past that. So that'd be more than a month... |
Guest chapter 3 . 11/18/2018 "Gimme heals plox" |
EagleDragon15 chapter 3 . 11/10/2018 3ch in and i love this story so far. Kinda sad Lili died, but i kinda understand it. Personally, i had a similar idea for a story, where hestia dies to the silverback, leading to different encounter when Aiz and Loki arrive at the scene, resulting in the devastated Bell joining their Familia. Your idea taking place later is an interesting take that i'm really enjoying so far! |