| Reviews for A Better Future |
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   noplaynogame3 chapter 5 . 9/8 continue please |
| Rice with Chest-Nuts chapter 1 . 9/1 no...seriously, this is interesting! |
| xXCoopyXx chapter 5 . 7/11 Hmmm... so I am guessing that this story is dead... considering that it’s been over a year now... or you are just really slow at updates? Feelsbadman |
| caedwards chapter 1 . 5/15 Very descriptive |
| Samthman chapter 5 . 2/11 Amazing story please keep up the good work |
| powermachine79 chapter 5 . 2/5 Looking forward to next chapter keep up the great work |
| Andzar chapter 5 . 1/30 I can't continue this.. Arggg.. Boring as fuck! |
| monsterkillers124 chapter 5 . 11/23/2019 needs to be updated more please |
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/12/2019 When are you going to continue the story. I want to see more. |
| Lord-of Oceans-Poseidon chapter 1 . 10/26/2019 Umm... cringe haha honestly read as if I was watching a teen drama on television |
| Silverman1212 chapter 1 . 10/1/2019 this was an interesting chapter , too bad from the first chapter i can see this will be all about him collecting women and having a huge harem , so not my thing . i dont mind harem stories but a reasonable small number not 10 women , these kinda stories are just for horny teens . really too bad i really like godlike MCs . anyway good luck . |
| Aetherium21 chapter 2 . 9/23/2019 Hopefully a legitimately noteworthy plot will manage to grow out of these first couple chapters. Thus far it’s just a Naruto circle-jerk; I don’t know whether that’s due to some authorial wish fulfillment or a different reason for creating some generic, shallow Mary Sue fic. |
| Damon Obsidian chapter 2 . 9/6/2019 Please add HINATA-CHAN |
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/25/2019 I this is interesting keep it going |
| Midnight Lost chapter 5 . 8/10/2019 This is a good start. Really enjoyed reading this so far. If you're still taking names for harem members, I would like to toss in Anko (assuming she has a similar past in this version) and Yugao. |
