I enjoyed your story but you left what is considered a hopeless situation they can't flee their death and be free. There's always someone finding them. And Irina's step to involve Vaughn to find Sydney and kill Sark bad move but he earned his death when he didn't believe Sydney to know what she's doing. I want the two to be happy and free. Will there be a sequel where they end this fate?

Great story! But I gotta ask; Is there a sequel, and does it say who was in the bushes?

She called him vaughn. who could confuse the two?

Unexpected!

Aww! he saved her!

I know you wrote this a while ago but i still had to review and say this was really good and i enjoyed reading it. thanks

Sark with a beard...OH MY GOD! I HAVE TO SEE THAT! that would have to be the seziest thing...

Well, now i have to kill you. ((just kidding)) Great ending, sad, but great.
Keep writing, darling.
BYE BYE
-Twinky

I'm sure everyone wants to thank Sark for being a very sexy man. Bravo for finishing this story and leaving us with a wonderful cliff hanger. Good job!

Ah *satisfied sigh* great ending! And there's no need to apologize for killing off Vaughn, it fit perfectly! Great job, was Irina in the bushes?
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the sequel and please post it soon! Or write it if you hadn't already done so!

WOW! Is it the real end? You can't leave us hanging like that! Not fair. JK! Good chapter. I understand why you had to kill off Vaughn.

Let it snow! (Inside joke)

Great story buddy! Keep writen!

You are gonna be everything you ever wanted. Dont ever lose your dream.

Twink

Oh, shoot. What happened? Please write more soon!

wow! i love your story! its so awesome. but you have to update soon please! i hate it when people leave cliffhangers and then dont update! so hopefully your not one of those people and you will update soon! PLEASE!