I'll be waiting for more!

Okay first of all - YOU ARE SUCH A TALENTED WRITER, the audience needs more!

This whole series in general is something I need more of. Chapter 3 really got me in my feels. I think you describe these character's emotions so well without necessarily being super overt about it, like the way you write Soma's choice of words "Salmon roe" - you get what he means without having him say it.

Also, your smut writing is incredible. 10/10 *fans self*

I do hope the fandom sees more of your Soueri/Sorina works! Cause they're amazing!

While the unusual punctuation was distracting at first, it was easy to take in stride after a while. What I found more crucial is your ability write much better than some other authors here. I’ve been browsing the M section and the more recent titles posted have been stiff, unnatural, and cold. This first chapter was beautifully poetic. Many people try to use eye color to spice up their writing but fail when they write too stiff and employing the wrong tone for the scene. Overall I’m impressed and can’t wait for the other chapters.

Tbh I didn't even notice the lack of capitalization. What I did notice, though, was topaz. Topaz, as a gemstone is a light blue in color, but I believe you were describing Soma's eyes which are yellow(as you stated). I also believe that this was probably unintentional, and you were meaning to use a color like amber(also technically a gemstone) to describe his eye color.

Next pleasee

Great writing once again, keep it up!

wow that was hot

Awesome!

Thank you so very much for this beautiful chapter! I loved it!

Even though you said it's not your best work, I think it's incredible! You captured my emotions so perfectly with your writing style and scenarios, I love this soooo much! ️️️️

Thank you for posting this chapter!

Take care!

So sweet. :)

I absolutely freaked out when Sōma called her pretty in Chapter 278. Such a wonderful scene...

I like the ‘absence of proper capitalization.’ It makes the story in its unique style, and feels sort of poetic, in a way.

Traipsingto wander aimlessly

Trapezingan acrobatic performance in circuses, involving death defying mid air flips from a trapeze swing

I mean if youre trying to get someone's attention, trapeze acts are one way to go about itbut i have a feeling you were going for traipsing

Thank you. I needed that too in light of recent events in the manga. Hugs.

Yeeesssss, yeeesssss, yeeesssss hahahahaha that was everything I needed right now! That was soooo awesome thank you so much for updating again I loved it so much it was beautiful!

Take care!

Ooo great start to the collection of one-shots! I can't wait to read the other ones!Update soon please!