I hope you will continue this very nice Story. Thumbs up!

I’ll be satisfied even with this semi filler. I seriously love this story so much (the first chapter wasn’t as bad as you say it is). I love the relationship between Randall and Thomas and how much the characters have grown. It’s interesting to see how one little interaction changed the whole story. I can’t wait to see what happens next (poor Thomas, together for less than an hour, but hopefully come back together later on).

Again, a very unexpected surprise. I definitely was waiting for this and you did not disappoint. Both having no idea what was going on and now Randall can’t trust Thomas because he thought he had something to do with it. I have a feeling that not only will Thomas go off on his teammates, but he’s going to do everything he can to get Randall back (got together and broke up in less than an hour). I definitely can’t wait to read more :)

This was a very pleasant surprise though I bet the OKs are going to have the surprise of their lives at the party. I wonder how Thomas and Randall will react and how it’ll affect their relationship. Not going to lie, I kinda want some conflict for some character and relationship development. To see how they act without each other for a little bit.

This was wonderfully written and I can’t wait to see what happens next :)

Wow, I’m so invested in this story. I really enjoy how one encounter changed Randall completely.

I hope to read more soon :)

I know I like seeing that Randy didn't join ROR in this story. He wouldn't become that evil monster that many know him to be. And it was understandable at the first game maybe how it turned out in the movie because being a freshman, Mike didn't know the rule of his group needing to stay together, but everyone should know the rules of each game too. Randy seemed more like the type to join Oozma Kapa anyway really when he was younger.

Definitely can help to have true friends who care for you on college campuses. To make sure you don't get into too much trouble or to help ya feel better.

Cool story loved it

I know I would have loved to hang out with young Randy. He was so cute!