praise the lord for this update

This story has been everything I never knew I wanted, thank you so much for writing it.

the more i read this, its feel more like sophisticated storytelling about the blooming romance between the two and its is so romantic.

Slightly kinda lagging for the plot to move forward, but still heartwarming nonetheless _

I got a big smile on my face reading this :)

About TIME you admitted you're into him, Aqua! And you Sephy, get your head out of your luscious hair and tell Aqua how YOU feel!

Fictional character scolding aside, you do a really good job at showing Aqua's seeming inability to relax for more than a few minutes. Kinda makes me wonder how she sleeps. The big question now is, how on earth is Xehanort going to react to all this?

Great chapter as always. The characterization remains on point. While I do know this is a romance story first and foremost, I enjoyed it the most when action was interspersed. I really want to see how Sora would react to all this, but I wanna see sepheroth and aqua kick the crap out of xeahnort. Looking forward to the next chapter!

i saw this also in the Ao3, having over 2k hits o.o wow.

anyway, thanks for the fast update! maybe it would be better for them to meet more of the characters to expand the horizon, but meh.. take your time :)

Sephiroth:
promises not to do anything stupid
is flirting with Aqua while scheming... something or other that probably involves getting a Keyblade for himself
Well you've already broken THAT promise, Sephi. Jokes aside, looks like this chapter was a short and sweet one. At this point I'm kinda surprised Aqua hasn't tried to hug him yet. Heck knows she needs to.

On one hand, I want to see Aqua as his Second, on the other hand... I want to see her as his Second. I wonder what will happen now that Sephiroth is going to help Aqua (is he though ? We'll see).
It is very well written (as always) :)

ahh~so glad for the update! thank you!

I find it a little amusing that Sephy start questioning the relation between darkness and light and seems already made up his mind to vanquish the darkness, makes me wonder what is Sephy real intent here?

I will eagerly be waiting for your future update!

I love it :)

I'm enjoying this story so far. Everything seems well written and the relationship is forming slow enough as to be believable. Keep up the good work!

I didn't know I wanted this until I read it :)
Sephiroth and Aqua, two of my favourites characters, and in one of your story, that's perfect :)
This is a damn good idea, now I can't wait to read the rest (oh but, wait a minute, isn't there already 24 chapters ? I am so lucky) :)

You know, I would have figured Sephi would accepted the answer that light and darkness are polar opposites and that one has no meaning without the other. In a bizarre, twisted way, he's always been one of the most logically-minded characters in Square Enix's history.

Anyways, it looks like he's more concerned with riding himself of his darkness for Aqua's sake than really anything else. If he isn't infatuated with her now, it's only a matter of time.

just wondering will there be a continuation? this is the only high-quality fanfiction of aquaroth that I could find