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   reallyseaweed chapter 1 . 5/20/2019 hahha cheesy ending! ohh Ron, i can see that he is not selfish enough to marry Hermione when he knows that Hermione is in love with Draco. go Ron. |
| saoyedaoez01 chapter 1 . 10/8/2018 Enjoyed it. |
| Kerioke chapter 1 . 7/28/2018 Overall I enjoyed the story, there were several easy grammatical errors that could be fixed, and the only other thing I'd suggest is adding to the area about Hermione trying to figure out what she wants to do. It seemed one minute she is confused then the next she is immediately saying yes to Draco without actually coming to a clear reason why she is finally choosing him. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2018 Loved it |
| Narcissa Louise Snape chapter 1 . 7/26/2018 real nice one shot I'm happy I could read it thank you |
| LCB chapter 1 . 7/26/2018 Super cute. |
| tmtcltb chapter 1 . 7/26/2018 So sweet! I love that Ron wasn't the bad guy. And Draco going all out for Hermione was perfect. |
| malugargula chapter 1 . 7/26/2018 Awwwwwwwww so sweet Loved it |
| Jessica Mondragon chapter 1 . 7/26/2018 This was such a cute one shot! I loved it! I loved supportive Ron who put his bias aside because Hermione loved Draco, and Ron knew Draco loved her. Some grammar issues, but some easy editing would clean that up quickly! (I would be willing to help if you'd like) Thank you for sharing! |
| yuthiks.maharaj chapter 1 . 7/26/2018 totally loving your story. Please keep on writing. |
