i like it for the most part, but there are a lot of mistakes that make it hard to read. can you please go over this and clean it up? and as someone who has a natural eye skip, i know whats its like to find mistakes and errors after i went though everything three times to make sure it looks and sound right. thank you for at least reading the post

good chapter update soon

I love this story please keep writing chapters

Gohan cursing it just feels funny but it’s fine. Gohan doesn’t seem to be as spineless as he was in the original run of Dbz well knowing that even vegeta isn’t on earth to protect the world should anything happen would probably lead to him growing a back bone. I wonder will anyone find out the boy is technically royalty ?

Damn Videl is one brat. Also, I do not recall Tien and Chiaotzu being taught the turtle way except changing their lifestyle

Gohans still training he should be rather strong then right also poor Goten having goku in less of his like than gohan did.

It's a fun premise...but poorly written. The dialog is jerky. The character interaction is rushed/disjointed and doesn't 'flow' smoothly.

Will gohan meet his grandma and will goku see how similar their core personality’s are? Also it was nice seeing goku and vegeta use their heads in this chapter.

Gohan is now a temporary leader that’s just awsome, he could go off looking for a training partner like a certain android who is rather strong due to constant training ... 17 cough cough. Overall good chapter.

I wonder what more sayajins mean for the z fighters especially since I’d the whole planet of filled with gokus race would gohan not wind up with people his age and not be susceptible to a blackmailer stalker (who gets nicer later on) since he’d have more social experiences. Also wouldent vegeta get to do his mentor thing?

Ummm could they be thinking of making what amounts to pride troopers of universe 7?