that was a nice ending

yay! A really nice ending, I must say.

Oh now this is exciting! Beginning to feel real bad for the two, honestly. This is good and keeps me entertained, thank you!

Oh! Fun! I like this! I like the way you describe small details. This story, I like it. *whispers* another :3

I LIKE THIS ODIN!
It is rare to find someone who paints Loki in a good light to also paint Odin in a good light as well. Usually one or the other seems to be the villain. I liked the father waiting for his sons to come home angle.

That's a really curious concept, I have to say.
Peter really needs to learn to make smarter choices, even if his actions ended up doing something good here, heh.
But yeah, the concept of both brothers falling into the void and being affected by what happened - and the way this alters how they repsonded to it and how that changed events... yeah, that's a fascinating one. I do wish more had been done with it, admitedly. As in, more had been shown instead of been experienced as one character filling an other character in on what they missed briefly. How DID Loki and Thor escape? How did they end up on earth and where had they tried to go if Loki was surprised about that result? How did they get the staff? How did discussions about that go between them and the Avengers, how was the subject of them leaving as they heal brought up as their "deal" was, how did everyone manage to get adjiusted, how did Nebula get in, how did Loki and Thor react to that, did May ever enquire about the brothers again, did they ever thank Peter or her for their help,... and so on and so forth.
I both really enjoyed and got really frustrated by this story in equal parts because of this, heh. Of course not all questions have to be answered in detail in a story such as this, but... yeah.

that was fun! Peter with all his anxiety dealing with both gods haha
poor Boy, but he did really well!

wow. just wow. I am very happy to find another person who is just like me except that you are older and smarter!

Is there a sequel?

Aaaww! This was wonderful! Nicely written.

AHAHAHAHAHAH! I am positively cackling! That's right, Peter, honey. Rescue/kidnap two men who may or may not be aliens and then do homework. Perfect and flawless characterisation! Well done, indeed!

Well done!

Really enjoyed this story. Thanks for writing it, love good Loki and them being in trouble. I just wish it had been longer and maybe Thanos himself had turned up.
Keep writing.

*brings two grown men in need of medical assistance home*

*does homework*

Peter never change

Hi,

I have enjoyed this fic very much. I was somewhat disappointed we didn’t get to see Thor and Loki falling off the bridge or what happened to them in between- is there a prequel or some such?
Anyway, well done, and thank you for posting!