Reviews for What We Fear the Most
RachelBarbraBerry chapter 12 . 11/16/2018
This had me on the edge of my seat and breaking my heart
Lanafan7151977 chapter 12 . 8/30/2018
I loved this a lot. I love that it started with Liv waking up because Alex wasn't in bed with her. I love that she sleepily got out of bed and went looking for her. I love that she found her sitting on the floor in Theo's room. I love that she got her to get up and go downstairs with her. I love that she made them some tea and they started to talk. I love that after a couple minutes they both stood up and hugged each other. I love that Alex asked Liv to make love to her and that Liv knew that not what she really needed. I love that after a few minutes of Alex kissing her Liv separated them and Alex started to sob and then she started to collapse and Liv caught her and they sat down on the floor. I love that after sitting there for a little bit Liv asked if they could move to the couch and Alex said yes. I love that as they were snuggling on the couch Alex asked Liv about when she had been taken and her talking with Dr. Lindstrom and then as she started to fall asleep she said she might try and talk with him. I love that Liv was happy knowing that Alex knows she might need to talk to a professional. I love that they got Alex's rings back. I love that Liv had them cleaned and brought them home to Alex in the same box they were originally in. I love that Liv got down on one knee and asked her to be her wife forever again. I love that she put the rings back on her finger. I love that Liv reassured Alex that they're going to get through this together. I loved this story and I'm really glad you wrote it.
Lanafan7151977 chapter 11 . 8/29/2018
I loved this. I love that it started with Liv in the car on the way to the precinct and that she was thinking about everything that Alex had went through. I love that she was getting angrier as she thought about all of it. I love that she didn't realize how much emotion she had let out until she parked in the parking garage and took her sunglasses off. I love that when Alex parents arrived she got very emotional and that she just let them both hug her and give her the love she really needs right now. I love that the kids came down and gave their grandparents hugs too. I love that Alex's mom made them dinner and then after that they told Alex to go upstairs and take her time doing what she needed to do while they watched the kids. I love that after her bath Alex didn't want to take a pain pill but she knew she needed to. I love that after that we went back to Liv and that she was able to get Raul to confess to taking Alex. I love that after that she went home to be with Alex. I love that as she was changing for bed Alex was having a nightmare but as soon as Liv got in bed with her and wrapped her arms around her she calmed down and fell back into a deep sleep.
Lanafan7151977 chapter 10 . 8/29/2018
I loved this. I love that it started with Alex leaving the hospital. I love that Jonathan came and picked them up. I love that when they got home Jonathan was going to let them get out at the front door but Alex wanted to go into the house the way she always does. I love that when they got into the house she went to take a shower and Liv made them some tea. I love that when she came back down the two of them talked in the kitchen while the kids sat on the couch watching television. I love that Liv got Alex to agree to tell her what happened later that day. I love that after they had lunch they cuddled with the kids then sent them upstairs to do some chores to earn a prize. I love that after that Alex told Liv everything that happened while she was being held by them. I love that after Alex finished telling what happened that Fin called and that Liv wanted to go and interview them because she wants them in jail for what they did. I love that Liv is worried because Alex isn't eating very much. I love that she got her to agree to try and eat something. I love that Liv told her that her parents were going to be arriving soon and asked if she was going to be alright. I love that Alex to Liv she was fine and to go get them. I love that Alex keeps telling her she's fine but there are little things telling me she's not really ok.
NoCapeNoCrown chapter 12 . 8/26/2018
️Thank you for writing this!
peterpeter chapter 12 . 8/23/2018
sad to see it end. but look forward to more new fics
els81 chapter 12 . 8/24/2018
I loved this storyline and this final chapter was perfect. As you said, we all know where the story goes.
As always, looking forward to updates on the others!
Mezz64 chapter 12 . 8/24/2018
Well we know Alex is struggling there was a short time in bed when Olivia is there that the demons in her mind come.

Although Olivia can help a certain about I do think she needs to speak with Dr Lindstrom even Huang but she needs excternal help. It’s only been to days and she is getting frustrated with herself. But I think someone who doesn’t know her so she feels less embarrassment.

The most endearing part was the end when Olivia made such an effort to get her engament ring and wedding ring even finding the original box they came in - now we all know that these are really expensive rings however that means nothing to that, the rings are meaniful to our ladies and hold so many memories for them. It was devine way to end the fiction with this chapter
Mx
Mitzy rocks chapter 12 . 8/24/2018
Ah Olivia is sooo good, getting the rings back just to please Alex...
BabouTunt chapter 12 . 8/24/2018
Really well done, and favourite
dlfngrl05 chapter 12 . 8/23/2018
Excellent wrap to this story... their love for each other is timeless and will get them through anything. The kids are their life and like Liv said, there is and her wife are what kept her sane and moving forward. Therapy would be good and it was in a roundabout way she mentioned about possibly going... that's big for Alex.

My only question is what happened to the girlfriend, she was never mentioned again and I feel she would have turned on Raul for all the things he did to her, sealing his fate.

Thanks again for another great story, I look forward to reading new chapters to your other stories.
sunstreakersapprentice chapter 12 . 8/23/2018
What a wonderful story and what a wonderful way to close it, with love and happiness. These two ladies are, what can I say but AWESOME!

I will always think of Olivia as the strong supportive detective we've known for a while.

Good job, no scratch that, GREAT job!

As long as you keep writing, I'll keep supporting you.
Guest chapter 12 . 8/23/2018
Thoroughly enjoyed this story. You write the relationship between Alex and Olivia so beautifully.
Chely99 chapter 12 . 8/23/2018
If it’s going to end there, I’m thankful that they found Alex’s rings. Together they can get through anything.
olivia-save-me chapter 12 . 8/23/2018
Love love love. Thanks for the update!
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